Never Did Run Smooth, Ch. 24

Dec 02, 2009 01:02

Rattrap faps, wrestles with his espionage tendencies, and finally makes it to second base. In that order.

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slash, oh the drama, rattrap, dinobot

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blkdragonqueen December 2 2009, 06:28:10 UTC
"carnivore cologne", Brilliant! ^_^ YAY! A new chapter! I'm so excited and so happy considering I've been out the past week with the mother of all colds! This brightened my night considerably. Rattrap on Dinobots berth... Purrrrrr. Man that was great! Very hot ( ... )

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ianam1983 December 2 2009, 20:35:58 UTC
Oh yes, he does indeed. I wondered how many people would catch the name.

They can all fight, but only Dinobot takes it this seriously. To them, it's a disagreeable but necessary task; to him, it's a way of life. He may not be the only thing standing between the Maximals and a very grisly defeat, but it's easy for him to feel like it sometimes. Optimus does have some idea of how bleak the situation looks from Dinobot's end, which is where a lot of his patience toward the warrior comes from.

Next chapter is a continuation of this, plus a bit more of Cheetor and Mimic to break things up. I like jumping around the story a bit. Chapters like this, where I stick to one scene from start to finish, are pretty rare for me.

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blkdragonqueen December 2 2009, 20:42:19 UTC
YAY! I noticed something. ;p Usually I'm completely oblivious. And more smutty goodness in the next chapter you say? ^_______^ WOOOO!

Optimus I believe does know the true darkness of the situation but his optimism I think is starting to irritate Dinobot. (I've been re-watching my dvds) Good thing Rattrap is there to take Dinobots mind off of it and to... *ahem* distract him. ^_~

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gogglehead84 December 2 2009, 12:17:24 UTC
Oh, oh it's getting hot in there!! XD It's about slagging time too!

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catraven December 2 2009, 18:19:21 UTC
It's official - I'm totally hooked on these two. I've even started watching old BW cartoons on YouTube so I can see them in action. :D

Going great! I'm eagerly awaiting the next installment!

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akisawana December 2 2009, 18:40:36 UTC
I LOVE THIS CHAPTER TITLE ( ... )

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ianam1983 December 2 2009, 20:23:46 UTC

- I BLAME YOU FOR CALLING IT SECOND BASE.
- Actually, Rattrap is younger than Dinobot. But dirty, yes, he is that regardless of age.
- "Sex-deprived" for Rattrap is having to go a week without. Imagine what it's been like for him since they've landed on Earth. All he gets now is the occasional wank session with the porn he managed to smuggle along… and Dinobot is better than porn.
- Yes, there is a window. I just didn't mention it. Also, he covers it sometimes because he likes to Brood In The Dark.
- Primal knows. He doesn't care as long as Dinobot's not smuggling their weapons out to the Predacons.
- He'll use it if he has to. It would have to be worth it, though, since Rhinox is very capable of making him sorry for trying.
- HABITS ARE HARD TO BREAK. Besides, it is tempting. There are more skeletons in Dinobot's closet than in that fossil pit near the Darksyde.
- He doesn't have a Megatron arm trophy yet. Trust me, he's working on it.
- Primal sure would. Of course, he's an Optimus, so he'd just come back.
- *Beeep* " ( ... )

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akisawana December 2 2009, 22:35:35 UTC
WELL, IT IS SECOND BASE. DO I NEED TO GET OUT THE BLOWUP DOLL ( ... )

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ianam1983 December 2 2009, 22:55:39 UTC

Oh, Rattrap's threatened him using blackmail material a couple of times. But they both know if he actually used it, he would pay.

He remembers. He's restraining himself. Barely.

I CANNOT PICTURE THAT. FUCK YOU VERY MUCH.

Safe sex for Predacons is sex near a convenient repair bay. You don't want to know what Rattrap's definition is.

I thought you might. It's depressing enough for you. And that does fit really well; I hadn't thought of it. Of course, now I can't un-think of it.

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raisedbymoogles December 2 2009, 19:49:08 UTC
Worth. The. Wait.

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