I liked this chapter - Dinobot has some pretty savage instincts there, and it's nice that you didn't gloss over them but incorporated them into the story. And Rattrap is great here - he expects what he gets, so he isn't disappointed. Nice that Primal gave him a stroke.
Somehow I manage to attract the worst kind of attention, sooner or later. You should've seen the row over at Fanficrants. :P
Glad you enjoyed it. Dinobot's finding it hard to get close to Rattrap without doing something terrible. At this point, Rattrap figures that even if it gets him killed, it's a hell of a way to go. What an idiot.
Oh, dear, you made it to Fanficrants? I'm so sorry. I avoid that place like the plague - it depresses me to no end. *hugs*
No, I love Rattrap! He's right - it's a hell of a way to go, so might as well enjoy the ride! Dinobot, OTOH, would have a hell of a guilt trip about what happened or what might have been.
I intend to. Be patient with me though, the next plot point's coming up and there's always a lag there. Also, I'm trying to write a conversation between Optimus and Rhinox in next chapter without anyone else around. It's awe-inspiringly boring. -_-
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I liked this chapter - Dinobot has some pretty savage instincts there, and it's nice that you didn't gloss over them but incorporated them into the story. And Rattrap is great here - he expects what he gets, so he isn't disappointed. Nice that Primal gave him a stroke.
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Glad you enjoyed it. Dinobot's finding it hard to get close to Rattrap without doing something terrible. At this point, Rattrap figures that even if it gets him killed, it's a hell of a way to go. What an idiot.
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No, I love Rattrap! He's right - it's a hell of a way to go, so might as well enjoy the ride! Dinobot, OTOH, would have a hell of a guilt trip about what happened or what might have been.
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