A lesson in Chemistry

Jun 13, 2007 19:50

Matterher skin made slow soft sighs ( Read more... )

friends, poetry, love

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skyelee June 14 2007, 00:45:44 UTC


I love this line:

she was now fluid, taking the shape of the body that held her close.

Don't we all take the shape of the person we love? I believe we do, in one way or another... regardless of whether we're in close proximity or not.

This is love, Rica. ♥
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ianinna June 15 2007, 09:30:30 UTC
That's EXACTLY what I was feeling and thinking when I wrote that part. That no matter how much I assert myself, no matter how much I insist my independence, I will always take the shape or take part in the identity of the person that I love.

And you are love, too.

*hugs*

Thank you!

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skyelee June 18 2007, 23:30:27 UTC
Sometimes, it's a good thing. And sometimes, it hurts because no matter how you fight it, you will always be seeing your beloved in you. Somewhere there. Tangible yet intangible.

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pao says: anonymous June 26 2007, 23:15:12 UTC
god i wish i could write like you... gimme more!!! wants to read more!!! HAHAHA

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