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iantalia

Straight Lines And Curve Balls, 7/15

Aug 15, 2011 22:13

Better late than never, right?

Title: Straight Lines and Curve Balls - Chapter 7
Fandom: NCIS
Beta: Unbetaed. But I proofread obsessively, if that helps?
Rating: R
Genre: Slash, humour, a little light angst
Pairing: Gibbs/DiNozzo
Disclaimer: I don't own any of them, more's the pity. If I did I'd share...
Description: In which fate has had enough.
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ncis, straight lines, fiction

Comments 19

ferneberga August 15 2011, 22:28:52 UTC

Aw!! Poor boys!! Having to listen to others getting it on while they feign disinterest in each other :-)
Looking forward to chap8

iantalia August 16 2011, 20:50:53 UTC

Well, if they'd be a bit more honest with each other they wouldn't have to!

ferneberga August 16 2011, 20:57:25 UTC

Not to mention less stubborn :-))

iantalia August 16 2011, 21:00:14 UTC

True, true. They're both so sure they're right about everything. Tsk.

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iantalia August 16 2011, 20:51:35 UTC

Glad you liked it! Thanks for commenting.

natasha_alexis August 16 2011, 05:23:11 UTC

I'm guessing this is a new form of torture to which Tony and Gibbs are now being subjected. They can't just say they want one another, oh no, that would be way too practical and satisfying, no they have to suffer in silence and all alone.

I recently re-read a story where the author described Gibbs as a stupidhead.... seems appropriate under the circumstances, although I would apply it equally to both of them.

Thank you for the update, and looking forward to the next one.

n_a

iantalia August 16 2011, 20:53:10 UTC

Yes - but I don't think the fact that its all self-inflicted is going to help. Definitely stupidheads.

sunsaralyn August 16 2011, 20:16:27 UTC

Ugh. I just want to reach through and slap them both. Preferably in view of the other. Then magically disappear.

Heh. Gonna be rather epic when they do figure it out, I think.

iantalia August 16 2011, 20:53:57 UTC

That is a wonderful image. I wish I could work it into the fic!

sunsaralyn August 16 2011, 21:00:17 UTC

Ahahaha. Crazy female perp? IDK. ;)

iantalia August 16 2011, 21:02:38 UTC

Hallucination? Dream? Fantasy sequence? Outtake? One off crack comment fic?

I think I need to stop this train of thought...

tonysmel August 17 2011, 22:51:32 UTC

Yay, so happy to see an update on this fun fic!
"Tony could feel his eyebrows creeping up towards his hairline." And that's pretty much how I felt reading this. I could just see this whole scene playing out so deliciously. And I just know that Gibbs isn't thinking what Tony "thinks" he's thinking, wink, wink, nudge, nudge.

I love how you've teased this story along. More please!
(And thank you).

iantalia August 18 2011, 21:06:37 UTC

Thank you! Glad you liked it.

And that's more teasing, right?

tonysmel August 18 2011, 22:47:21 UTC

Hell yeah!! And anything else you'd care to throw into the mix :)