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iantalia

Straight Lines And Curve Balls, 12/15

Dec 28, 2011 22:25

Title: Straight Lines and Curve Balls - Chapter 12
Fandom: NCIS
Beta: Unbetaed. But I proofread obsessively, if that helps?
Rating: R
Genre: Slash, humour, a little light angst
Pairing: Gibbs/DiNozzo
Disclaimer: I don't own any of them, more's the pity. If I did I'd share...
Description: In which Gibbs is feeling the heat.
Warnings: None

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ncis, straight lines, fiction

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laura_trekkie December 29 2011, 18:21:30 UTC

C'mon, Gibbs, don't blame the alcohol, or Tony... just go with it :).

Laura.

iantalia December 30 2011, 21:28:30 UTC

Methinks the man's grabbing at excuses now. Damn stubborn SOB...

tonysmel December 30 2011, 21:25:34 UTC

"They could have whole conversations in the sound of the wood being worked and the house settling easily around them."

Oh, I love this so much. It defines their relationship so well. And if they could just get beyond their fears, and take that next brave step forward, I think they would see that it wouldn't change that basic core of their relationship at all. Just add another dynamic.

Oh, and I love Gibbs description of Tony's smile. It is dangerous, and pretty much puts me in full swoon.

Loving this.

iantalia December 30 2011, 21:29:50 UTC

Thank you. I'm beginning to think we might need a shotgun here though. Could beat them over the head with the blunt bit...

opusnedddy January 5 2012, 16:26:41 UTC

"and all this effort and sweat and space could be put to much better use" - Lovely! This is just great!

"a warm, comfortable, easy drunk that just needed a log fire. And a rug. And a locked door." And then to lead up to this - Whew! Such a lovely visual that then goes RED HOT! Beautiful and emotionally powerful. You did a great job of showing the build-up:D

iantalia January 7 2012, 13:31:38 UTC

Thank you!