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Heroes fic: Ramifications

Sep 27, 2009 22:39

Title: Ramifications
Author: icalynn
Fandom/Pairing: Heroes, Mohinder/Sylar
Word Count: 1018
Rating: Teen
Summary: Sylar can't stray too far from his destiny, not even for the love of the man he craves.
A/N:Once upon a time, I had a little series that followed the events of S1, through Mohinder's and Sylar's povs, what could have happened. Written in ( Read more... )

slash, heroes, fic

Comments 6

starrdust411 September 28 2009, 14:47:43 UTC

I remember these stories! It has been a while since I read the other parts, but I do remember them :P

This was so sweet and sad. Sort of the way I wanted Vol 1 to end (although what they gave us was pretty good).

icalynn September 30 2009, 03:41:41 UTC

Ah, thank you and yes, the vol 1 was good, this was just an extra twist of what could have happened, they way I would have prefered. *g*

Thanks for reading and commenting! <3

levitatethis September 28 2009, 21:59:46 UTC

I've always enjoyed this verse and I like the way you've drawn things to a near ending but with this hint of more to come.

I like the, at times battling, feelings of want and need. Without knowing it Mohinder speaks to this side of Gabriel that seemed untouchable for so long and it evokes a certain vulnerability. And then there's this innate need to complete his destiny even if it is moving away from the one person he wants more than anything. You do a nice job of capturing this internal struggle and the confusion that looms over it.

I quite like the way the confrontation plays out as if you're layering pieces of a puzzle together -- from the confrontation with Peter to Mohinder inserting himself to the surprise of Hiro attacking -- it's fate without the handbook.

Nice to see Mohinder and Sylar getting a touching but still somewhat snarky end, complete with a kiss...

icalynn September 30 2009, 03:44:53 UTC

Thank you! BB and I were talking about Mylar the other day and I miss them so. I started this forever ago and I felt the urge to finish it off.

Thanks for reading and commenting!

mabetini September 30 2009, 01:07:33 UTC

Ohh this made me wibbly!!!! What happenedddddd?!?!

icalynn September 30 2009, 03:46:33 UTC

Oh! *hugs*

Well, pretty much like the end of S1, but instead of going into the sewer to be healed, he's being taken to the hospital with Mohinder beside him.

Thanks for reading and commenting!