Numb3rs - Drabble - Impressed

Aug 20, 2008 20:25

Impressed

Ian followed Don’s black SUV in his pickup to the FBI building. The traffic was beginning to clog the roads as the average citizens made their way to work. The sniper parked beside Don, but it wasn’t until they were waiting for the elevator that Don started a conversation.

“Thanks,” Don said.

Ian turned to the agent. “For showing up?”
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drabble, notepad series, numb3rs, ian edgerton, don eppes

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emmademarais August 20 2008, 12:41:33 UTC
Nice! It's still weird to see drabbles outside of the drabble comm, but nice!

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icarus_iso August 21 2008, 10:55:45 UTC
Thanks!

Yea, about that... I really wouldn't mind using the numb3rs100 prompt list and posting there but most of the future drabbles are/will be over the comm's 300 word limit... any suggestions?

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emmademarais August 21 2008, 17:50:20 UTC
Well, past 300 words (which is a triple drabble as it is) they're no longer drabbles. We do have people post drabble series which consist of multiple drabbles which individually can't be more than 300, but the series can be. Each drabble still needs a separate prompt, but you can tell a longer story that way.

Here's an example of a four prompt series I did recently. It shows how you can use separate drabbles to tell a longer story and stay within the drabble format limitations.

Degrees of Freedom

If you'd prefer, just post only the fic that are 300 words or less on the comm. You'll probably get enough interest that people will follow the link back for more.

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icarus_iso August 22 2008, 06:33:54 UTC
You learn something new every day (or a few things in my case).

Well I'll post anything under 300 words in numb3rs100 from now on, when they come from the prompt list of course.

Loved the Degrees Of Freedom series btw.

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mia_dcwut_09 August 20 2008, 13:59:44 UTC
nice I could see this being some what a deleted scene
great work

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icarus_iso August 21 2008, 10:57:06 UTC
Thank you!

*hugs*

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mia_dcwut_09 August 21 2008, 13:08:36 UTC
no problem *hugs back*

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paranoid_woman August 20 2008, 20:04:38 UTC
“Just decent?”

LOL, I could so see Don's face in that moment. *g*

“Don’t take my shot again.”

Ahhhh, that's such a good Ian moment... :D

Thank you so much for this! It's sooo great! *g*

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icarus_iso August 21 2008, 10:59:37 UTC
Maybe not sooo great, but I'm getting there.

Thanks! *g*

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ladygray99 August 20 2008, 20:06:53 UTC
I do like this little series of yours.

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icarus_iso August 21 2008, 11:03:46 UTC
Glad to hear it.

There was no Charlie in this one so I wasn't sure about posting it in sniper_voodoo.

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ladygray99 August 21 2008, 19:40:44 UTC
Just link all the parts together when you're done.

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ancientcitadel August 21 2008, 09:24:26 UTC
Yay another one! I love the interaction between Ian and Don in this and congratulation on the word count. :)

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icarus_iso August 21 2008, 11:04:37 UTC
Thanks!

I love the Larry icon by the way, so cute!

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ancientcitadel August 21 2008, 11:57:09 UTC
Yeah, it is. It was made by toomuchfandom. :)

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