John/Cam friendship, SGA/SG-1

[icarusancalion]

Am seeking a beta who can tell me if:

a) My story is plot-less and
b) If I have Cam's voice right

Any takers? It's short, only ~700 words long.

Yes. I wrote A Thing.

Comments

[esteefee]

sure send me the Thing. artemis.arrow@yahoo

[icarusancalion]

Thank you! It's inbound.