Comments | icaruslived: The Missing Stair

icaruslived

The Missing Stair

Mar 25, 2014 07:50

The objective lay in front of us, looking exactly as it had in the training simulations ( Read more... )

management apologises for the cliché, military, ljidol, fiction

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elledanger March 24 2014, 23:46:11 UTC

I really enjoyed this - I loved the staccato style.

icaruslived March 26 2014, 09:08:30 UTC

Thanks! To be honest, nothing about the prompt and thus any of the premises I could come up with grabbed me super well, so I guess I figured I may as well try to write it as well as I could!

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icaruslived March 26 2014, 09:08:48 UTC

I'm glad you enjoyed it!

violaconspiracy March 26 2014, 00:16:37 UTC

Nice work!

icaruslived March 26 2014, 09:09:02 UTC

Thanks for reading!

basric March 26 2014, 10:26:20 UTC

True military style. I enjoyed your world.

icaruslived March 31 2014, 22:38:15 UTC

Thank you very much!

iwriteflash March 26 2014, 16:36:54 UTC

Oh! This is so action-packed. I loved how you used the {}. Neat :)

icaruslived March 31 2014, 22:38:56 UTC

That's the idea that brought the piece together, I think. One more editing pass would have inserted a couple more, towards the top.

Thanks for reading!