Chekhov's Gun

Jul 27, 2014 16:51


Okay.

This is it.

This is it.

I take a deep breath, and walk forward, into the bright sunlight and cheering crowds of the stadium.

The announcer is blaring away - “the Sixth Annual World Championships! And” - but I tune him out, focusing on my opponent. Establish early, I can remember my master saying, her moonlit voice bathing our practice hall. ( Read more... )

so meta, ljidol, meta, so very meta, experimental, fiction

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swirlsofblue July 31 2014, 09:17:53 UTC
love your interpretation of the prompt, funny and brilliant

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icaruslived August 6 2014, 09:03:30 UTC
Thank you very much!

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bleodswean July 31 2014, 14:23:39 UTC
This is utterly perfect. Again and again and again I am left awed by your intelligence and skillful wordcrafting.

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icaruslived August 6 2014, 09:03:40 UTC
ohgod all the blushface

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halfshellvenus July 31 2014, 19:10:39 UTC
This was clever and intriguing on SO many levels, and worked on every single one of them. :)

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icaruslived August 6 2014, 09:04:34 UTC
Stitching this together was hard! My favourite stories ever work on multiple levels even as each level comments on the others, and this gave me a little taste of just how difficult that must be.

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roina_arwen July 31 2014, 21:30:47 UTC
Very creative!

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icaruslived August 6 2014, 09:04:44 UTC
Thank you so much!

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karmasoup August 7 2014, 21:36:09 UTC
I'm really sorry now that I didn't get to this last week... it's frickgen BRILLIANT!

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icaruslived August 8 2014, 01:41:26 UTC
Thank you so much!

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