Introductions

[icaruslived]

"The Introduction's here."

I looked up. Alex was entering from the Comms room, with a fat stack of letters in her hand. She waved them at me lightly, and grinned.

My eyes widened. "So much! From the Granted, right? So I guess they took - what, about a month to write it up

Comments

[penpusher]

I think you did okay too! Looking forward to discovering more!

[icaruslived]

Thanks! It wasn't meant to be a metaphor, but I guess it wasn't meant to not be a metaphor either :P

[muchtooarrogant]

What a very interesting concept. Welcome to the competition, and I look forward to reading more of your writing this season.

Dan

[icaruslived]

Glad to be here! Would you say the underlying conceit came through okay?

[muchtooarrogant]

Yeah, I think so, although a little bit more about how the practice of exchanging letters got started and why would've probably helped. Also, just a suggestion, mightn't they use computer disks, or chips, or something which would allow for more indepth communication?

Dan

[jem0000000]

Aww. :)

[tsuki_no_bara]

i love that granted, we have yet to make a deal is the name of a spaceship. and from what i understand of lj idol, your metaphor is a good one ("your world being suddenly, fleetingly, so much bigger").

(it's my first idol so what i understand about it may or may not be accurate....)

[cheshire23]

I love the idea of opening a new world. :)