The Cupertino Effect

[icaruslived]

9 April, 2211. T+0 hours.

And said Yahweh: they are one people and one language all, this is what allowed them to do this; and now nothing which they devise to do will be blocked to them.

It was bedlam.

Absolute bedlam.

All my inputs were scrambled, but everyone was shouting. Local VR seemed to be still architecturally sound - buildings were

Comments

[eska818]

You never cease to amaze me with your creativity.

[icaruslived]

It'll happen at some point, I'm sure of it :p

[roina_arwen]

Intriguing! :)

[icaruslived]

Thanks!

[penpusher]

The babble of Babel was a clever endeavor! A Sci Fi futuristic story loosely based on a biblical tale is something that I'm actually surprised we don't see more of. Fantastic!

[icaruslived]

It is a pretty great source of stories, isn't it?

Thanks!

[rayaso]

What a great, creative and unusual story! I loved the mixing in of the Tower of Babel. The ending was wonderful.

[icaruslived]

Thank you very much!

[karmasoup]

Oh, this ended up being tragic after all. . . I didn't see that coming. So sad, I was pulling for them. This attempt, though, was nothing less than epic. (And Smiley to Zorga totally made me giggle.) You have to wonder who would do this, and why. I hope Clara tries again with her band of rebels.

(Fingers crossed for an OsWIN next time! )

[icaruslived]

You say that as if it's a surprise :p

(It was a surprise to me as well, that this story worked okay with a tragic ending!)