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ice_hot_13

Fic: Never To Break You (31)

Jul 09, 2012 14:01

Sorry this has taken forever- thanks for being so patient! SECOND TO LAST CHAPTER!!!! AHHH!

( Chapter thirty-one )

kevin bieksa, fic: never to break you, maxim lapierre, team: vancouver canucks

Comments 17

ladymamie09 July 10 2012, 03:12:09 UTC

Stop breaking my heart woman; I just want to wrap them up in a big fluffy blanket and never let go.

ice_hot_13 July 11 2012, 07:12:34 UTC

The poor things deserve itttt <3

miss_warina July 10 2012, 04:17:33 UTC

Just... no words... Beautiful *-*

ice_hot_13 July 11 2012, 07:12:12 UTC

Awwww <3

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ice_hot_13 July 11 2012, 07:11:48 UTC

Poor Maxxxxxiiimm

You sure know how to scare a guy! love_baseball July 10 2012, 05:29:36 UTC

Man, I didn't see this coming - I had forgotten the original search for the missing AHL player and all that Kevin had known. Maxi's hurt and betrayal really hit me hard, as did Kevin's fear of Maxi leaving again. I didn't think Maxi would go, but I wasn't sure until the magic text, "will you please come home". Just then I realized I had been holding my breath for a long time! You are a powerful writer. I'm really sad that the last chapter is coming - make it a good one! Thank you for everything, you write a great story.

Re: You sure know how to scare a guy! ice_hot_13 July 11 2012, 07:10:10 UTC

Kevin forgot too

misskes July 10 2012, 15:49:17 UTC

Omg. That's all. I have no other coherent words right now. I will get back to you when my mind clears and my heart stops racing. Dear lord!!!

ice_hot_13 July 11 2012, 07:09:02 UTC

Awww yay! I'm glad you liked it :)