Fic: Completion

Sep 08, 2012 11:44

Title: Completion
Pairing: Lapierre/Bieksa, (Lapierre/OMC)
Rating: nothin
Summary: Maxim fell in love with a teammate.

Super tempted to use Russian letters as my scene breaks. It'd be pretty cool.

Fic here! )

kevin bieksa, maxim lapierre, team: vancouver canucks

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chelischick September 8 2012, 20:07:39 UTC
ice_hot_13 September 16 2012, 06:55:45 UTC
<3
DONT THEY THOUGH :D

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zortified September 8 2012, 20:17:39 UTC
Awwwww. So sad and then so awesome.

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ice_hot_13 September 16 2012, 06:55:09 UTC
i'm glad you liked it! :D

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psharp10 September 9 2012, 04:06:25 UTC
Broken!Maxi omg, you know exactly what it takes for me to fall in love with a fic! <3 :')

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ice_hot_13 September 16 2012, 06:53:41 UTC
i love breaking sweet maxi <3

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lisapy74 September 9 2012, 04:52:26 UTC
Beautiful, as always!! I love Kevin and Max <3

Loved this sentence and thought it captured Max's emotions perfectly: "It felt like waiting, like he’d already fallen apart and was just waiting for the realization to hit him, falling and knowing where he’d end up, and this, this is just waiting for the end of the fall."

I love how you talk about all the things Max left behind in various places, and how he never expected to find them again. That was really cool :)

THIS: “I’m different,” Kevin says softly.

“How?”

“Because,” Kevin’s so close to him, and he’s looking at Maxim like he’s the only thing in the world. Maxim hasn’t been able to recognise this, because it’s always been the way Kevin’s looked at him. “I’ve been waiting for you to say that.”

God, I love the way you write these two. I've missed them. Thank you for writing this. So beautiful and perfect that they finally found each other like it was supposed to be. Perfect <33

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ice_hot_13 September 16 2012, 05:17:34 UTC
awwww <3

I love getting things quoted <3 I've missed writing them! ahaha even though i'm currently writing TONS on them, but, you know. you can never have too much :D

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lisapy74 September 16 2012, 05:29:16 UTC
<3

I know you love getting things quoted, so I try to do that for you as much as I can <3 But most of the time, I could just quote the whole entire fic, which would probably break LJ. It's all so awesome!! I've missed reading them, but so very happy to hear that you are writing TONS of them.... no, you can never ever have too much of them!! :D

They are just the greatest :)

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