i really like the chorus and last verse paticularly, it's all very good. nice concept. well not nice but you know. some of the lines could have others inbetween to break up the rhyming, i try and do that.
this bit's really cool: As she sits on the top of the clouds she's screaming Why can't the stone hearts stop me bleeding Living the life i could be leading My stone cold surface is receding
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this bit's really cool:
As she sits on the top of the clouds she's screaming
Why can't the stone hearts stop me bleeding
Living the life i could be leading
My stone cold surface is receding
i feel like i need a greyed out rainbow now.
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Hang on, i'll talk to you on msn instead, its easier
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