Comments | ice_ziggee: Fic challenge.

ice_ziggee

Fic challenge.

Feb 21, 2011 18:11

Title: One night in Montana
Fandom/Pairing: Criminal Minds, Hotch/Reid
Rating: NC-17
Warning: Slash
Word count: ~3300
Summary: Wet and cold Hotch gets more then he thought possible in a small cabin in the wilderness of Montana.

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hotch/reid, criminal minds, fic

Comments 8

kuriadalmatia February 21 2011, 19:05:42 UTC

Actually, I think you did very well with the prompt. It has that nice push-pull of emotions between them as Hotch tries to sort out how he feels and Reid alternates between confidence and self-consciousness. It's like they both know that they have this one chance and, well, take a chance. Nicely done. Thanks for sharing!

ice_ziggee February 22 2011, 23:50:10 UTC

Thank you for your kind words, they mean a lot to me coming from you.

agirlnamedluna February 21 2011, 19:33:19 UTC

Aawww I'm loving the additions to this :) It does make a lot of sense like this, so beautiful :)

ice_ziggee February 22 2011, 23:51:26 UTC

I feel like I forced out ever single word and they didn´t even seem to fit.

Thank you for reading and commenting, and for the earlier read through, <3333

agirlnamedluna February 23 2011, 00:24:10 UTC

Oh it fits, trust me <3

daylyn February 21 2011, 22:22:38 UTC

What a lovely and warm story. I like Spencer caring for Aaron and the conflicting emotions between them. I love the feeling of hope in the ending. Well done!

ice_ziggee February 22 2011, 23:53:59 UTC

Thank you for kind and warm words and for taking the time to read.

ousoonerfan February 26 2011, 17:26:52 UTC

A wonderful story...LOVE H/R!!!!