Fic - An Itch You Can't Scratch - Bella/Carlisle

[icegirl99]

An Itch You Can’t Scratch

Author: Mrs Ronald Weasley
Rating: R
Pairing/s: Bella/Carlisle, mentions of Edward/Bella
Category: Humor
Spoilers: None
Warnings: Some sexual content, medical kink, mature subject matterSummary: Bella’s dealing with some personal issues. Too embarrassed to tell anyone, she decides to go to see the doctor alone. However

Comments

[captjackspeanut]

Most favorite line ever!!

“Bella, are you asking me to stimulate you sexually?” Carlisle was quiet.

I laughed out loud so hard...*rolls around on floor* It is almost something I expect Edward to say really. xD

and I would use Edward's hands as ice any day. :P

This was bloody fantastic and I love you for it.

*hugs*

[icegirl99]

LOL. Okay, I have to admit that line was hilarious. But I had intended it on being funny, and serious at the same time. But yeah, Edward could say that too.

I had a specific voice in my head for Carlisle with this one. So if it's off, that's why.

I love you too. *hugs back*

[captjackspeanut]

I would love to have a fantasy with those 2 (edward and carlisle) and hell...maybe even Jasper. lol.

[icegirl99]

Lol, me too love. Me too.

[burnlikepetals]

Bella/Carlisle is my favorite ship ever.. so I love you for this.

[icegirl99]

Lol, thank you! And I am working on an alternate ending, with much more smut. Lol.

[ingrid44]

An alternate ending eh? okay, I think I can guess. But, this was good; very interesting. I've not seen anything with Carlisle actually practicing his profession; except stitching up Bella after her birthday party. Refreshing.
Nice to see Bella can be as human as the rest of us girls.

[icegirl99]

Lol, the alternate ending is what I had originally intended on writing. However, I found as I was writing this, it just sort of...went the way that it did. lol

And I've never really read anything with Carlisle practicing either. Which is why I love writing about it.

[misslastrange69]

This was surprisingly really good. I love you're writing style and the pairing idea. I am totally on team Bellisle :)

Hope you're having a good day!

[icegirl99]

Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[xahoapar]

Excellent post I must say.. Simple but yet interesting and engaging.. Keep up the awesome work!