Charlotte, your poetry is beautiful- and I mean it. I loved how, as it went on, it got more gritty and painful... though pain isn't fun. Your poem is the perfect mix of wit and biting anger/sarcasm = truth that I love. I said something on Beck's LJ... we have a little online, LJ poetry workshop going on here!! Maybe we should consider having a REAL one... just for fulfillment and to get together... hmm... (I'm sorry for the pain.) Friday night- game. And call me! I have a tonnnn to tell you- maybe us girlies should get together before the game, to gab... I think we ALL have major news and updates to yack yack about FOREVER!!! I miss you!!!!!!!!!!! I love you!!! Love, Alyssa
see it's more just me putting everything in stanza form cause it's fun to write that way the game will be fun! yay
; ) oh yeah, and many, many updates with not only monkey boy, but the other boy, the boy who dosen't have a code name, but i think you know who i mean! *swoons*
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(I'm sorry for the pain.) Friday night- game. And call me! I have a tonnnn to tell you- maybe us girlies should get together before the game, to gab... I think we ALL have major news and updates to yack yack about FOREVER!!! I miss you!!!!!!!!!!! I love you!!! Love, Alyssa
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see
it's more just me
putting everything
in stanza form
cause it's fun to write that way
the game will be fun!
yay
; ) oh yeah, and many, many updates with not only monkey boy, but the other boy, the boy who dosen't have a code name, but i think you know who i mean! *swoons*
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