[One Piece] One Step Forward, Two Steps Back

[ichigo_otaku01]

Title:   One Step Forward, Two Steps Back
Pairing:  SanUso
Rating:  NC-17
Warnings: Boyxboy, mpreg, fail!smut during early pregnancy, hilarity, cursing
Summary:  None atm
Note:  I KNOW, LAUGH.  I TOLD MYSELF AND MY BETA I WOULDN’T DO IT, BUT I’M SMUTTING UP THE BASIL UNIVERSE.  And I can only imagine I’ll have a fic later on when one of the twins

Comments

[aech_fic]

Couldn't resist reading this one right away at the mentions of both fail!sex and pregnancy in the same drabble. You have absolutely no idea how goddamn funny this turned out, and I'm assuming I don't have to tell you why.

Poor Usopp, you probably wouldn't have had so many issues if you guys had just started out the way you finally ended it. But just wait 'til you try doing that later on with a goddamn watermelon-sized bulge between the both of you...

All I gotta say is thank god for lovers/boyfriends/husbands with a good-natured sense of humor.

[ichigo_otaku01]

I knew it would garner attention just from the warnings. xD And it was insanely funny to write, more so when I started on it while sitting on campus at a table with my friends. And casually said I was writing it at one point. It was priceless. Nothing beats my boyfriend's response though, I'm pretty sure he was laughing his ass off when I told him.

Damn, now I wanna try writing THAT kind of fail smut. The whole time I wrote this, I was thinking of Knocked Up and how awkward the main characters were when they tried having sex. I can already see Usopp saying something along the lines of internal organs getting kicked around.

I need to get the initial fic where they find out about Usopp's pregnancy done. I have a few Basil stories in the works, but that's the one I want to finish first. I did a draft version that I'm not quite happy with, so we'll see if I can redo it. Until then, I'm glad you like this one! : )

[wingless_tori]

Fail!smut indeed! Poor babbu Usopp cramping at the worst times. Go, Sanji! Get that heating pad! Make your lovely feel better.

[ichigo_otaku01]

Yes, although Usopp sort of made it better towards the end, despite the pain. xD At least he's around to help Usopp feel better. : ) I was thinking they could take a shower together, maybe end up having sex again, but I figured Usopp's in enough pain. xD

[lampu]

Abooboo, poor Usopp and his cramps. ;___;

It's so amazing how I can imagine these scenes in my head, because you write so well!

[ichigo_otaku01]

Lampu, your comment made me smile all quiet like. xD Thank you so much, it makes me feel really good about my writing. : )

And yes, I'm sorry Usopp! I'll make it up to you somehow, promise!!