YES YOU SHOULD WRITE THE NIGHT BEFORE BECAUSE AWKWARD SEX IS GREAT. lolz, Actually I am pretty wussy when it comes to writing smut too.
But anyway ffffft I gushed during this whole thing. It was so adorable and sweet and my teeth are filled with cavities. My critique? ... You have "gow" instead of "how" lol.
Also I do have msn messenger but I appear offline a lot lol. Do you still want it? I'll PM it to you if you like. :)
a smile plays on jinki's lips, memories of the previous night's events dancing through his mind and leaving behind trails of candy-sweet footsteps in their wake. the imagery~~~ this really was so sweet *A* i just love moments like these, haha. ugh ontae, the perfect couple for awkward good mornings. i am happy now, after reading this ;A;
I'M PRETTY SURE THAT I HAVE READ THIS. I did. I DID. Oh. And I like the icon you set up for this one. itsreallyfuckingadorable.
SO MY FAVORITE LINE OUTTA THIS WHOOOOOOLE THING (mind you, I found the whole thing beautiful and omfg, I'm loving the way even moooore now, how you're starting to write.) WAS: i have...issues with writing smut. i'm a wuss. don'tjudgeme. :<
OH MAN. I loved that. But not as much as I love yoooooou.~ :3c
OKAY, BUT SERIOUSLY. MY FAVORITE LINE WAS: this, jinki thought, eyes never leaving taemin's. this is definitely what love feels like.
Youkilledmewiththatone. KIIIIIIIIIIIILLED ME. It was so sweet and and. ;-;
I loved it so much, baby. And I definitely think you're improving. ♥
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But anyway ffffft I gushed during this whole thing. It was so adorable and sweet and my teeth are filled with cavities. My critique? ... You have "gow" instead of "how" lol.
Also I do have msn messenger but I appear offline a lot lol. Do you still want it? I'll PM it to you if you like. :)
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oh! i see it there. LOL i should re-read things before i post. thank youuuuu~ -showers you in hearts- ♥
and yes! you can just uh. im me whenever you see i'm on or something. :)
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please
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a smile plays on jinki's lips, memories of the previous night's events dancing through his mind and leaving behind trails of candy-sweet footsteps in their wake. the imagery~~~ this really was so sweet *A* i just love moments like these, haha. ugh ontae, the perfect couple for awkward good mornings. i am happy now, after reading this ;A;
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SO MY FAVORITE LINE OUTTA THIS WHOOOOOOLE THING (mind you, I found the whole thing beautiful and omfg, I'm loving the way even moooore now, how you're starting to write.) WAS: i have...issues with writing smut. i'm a wuss. don'tjudgeme. :<
OH MAN. I loved that. But not as much as I love yoooooou.~ :3c
OKAY, BUT SERIOUSLY. MY FAVORITE LINE WAS: this, jinki thought, eyes never leaving taemin's. this is definitely what love feels like.
Youkilledmewiththatone. KIIIIIIIIIIIILLED ME. It was so sweet and and. ;-;
I loved it so much, baby. And I definitely think you're improving. ♥
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BUT, THANK YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUU.
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thank you! no, you're so awesome. :3
and your taem icon is presh. ;-;
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Yours is too omg. But you won't believe what I'm saying seriously. I think... The teaser kinda sucks. As in, their new concept ;-;
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