Harry/Draco Drabble: Hermione is Always Right

Mar 18, 2017 20:15

Title: Hermione is Always Right
Author: icicle33
Prompt #13: A difficult decision for draco100
Character(s) / Pairing(s): Harry/Draco
Rating: G
Word count: 100x2
Summary: Harry wants to ask Draco out on a date.
Notes: This is my first drabble for this community and actually ever. I don't know how to write short things. It takes place in an 8th year AU.

Hermione is Always Right )

harry/draco, draco100, drabbles, fluff, my fic

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evening12 March 19 2017, 00:29:21 UTC
As Harry stabbed a roasted potato... is for some reason my favourite part of the drabble. I real like the imagine it bring up in my mind. Good use of your limited amount of words to carry your story forward. :)

I also believe that off scream Snape's eye is twitching as Harry is stabbing his patatoes...because other vegetables have gone through the same treatment on previous evenings.

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icicle33 March 19 2017, 00:58:52 UTC
It was much harder than I thought to write a story in such few words. I'm glad you liked it.

I loved your assessment of Snape. You're so right...Harry has been stabbing poor, defenseless vegetables all term.

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evening12 March 19 2017, 17:58:09 UTC
Bah. Your icon! I'm loving it lol

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icicle33 March 20 2017, 00:22:27 UTC
haha...it's an old one. You're more than welcome to it if you like it.

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felixfvlicis March 19 2017, 00:51:32 UTC
*Tackles you*
You did it! I knew you could.
And it was absolutely lovely.

My favorite line was this one:

“Oh, Harry. Stop sulking. It’s not a difficult decision-” Shaking her head, she leaned closer. “Anyone with eyes can see you’re mad for him. Why don’t you just ask him already?”

Just so incredibly Hermione and the "you're mad for him" bit had me swooning. God.

Please write more of these!

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icicle33 March 19 2017, 00:55:17 UTC
I'm glad you liked it. Just a bit of pointless fluff. It was HARD though. Who knew writing such few words could be so difficult?

I'm glad you convinced me to try. Perhaps next week I'll write another when there are new prompts.

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fantasyfiend09 March 19 2017, 02:39:01 UTC
So much bang in so few words. I love Harry sulking and abusing inncocent veg until Hermione lights a fire under him. And I love that Draco was cold until he realized what Harry was really asking. Cuuute!

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icicle33 March 20 2017, 00:24:02 UTC
Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it. Draco likes to pretend he's cool and collected even if he's secretly ecstatic to be talking to Harry too.

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digthewriter March 19 2017, 05:57:34 UTC
Love it.

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icicle33 March 20 2017, 00:24:21 UTC
Thanks lovely!

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capitu March 19 2017, 13:19:09 UTC
Aww, she is! I love it, that they are both pining for the other. ;) :)

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icicle33 March 20 2017, 00:25:22 UTC
Thanks lovely! I have such a thing for secret pining...omg it's terrible. lol

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