New fanfiction Part 2

[icitall]

Author: ICitAll

Rating: NC17

Summary: He’s willing to take the risk if she is.

Disclaimer: I do not own these characters

A/N: This is a sequel or a continuation of  “A Sorta Fairytale”

Falling to Pieces

Part 2

Its eight weeks later and John is pretty sure he’s never been happier. John has the day off and

Comments

[anuna_81]

This was perfect! i enjoyed every single word, and for the record, you are the rirst person who made me hate Rodney for a while. ;) Good job!!!

[magnavox_23]

Aww! It's a beautiful story. Loved them surfing XD

[little_whispers]

So glad he punched Rodney otherwise i would have done it!
i think this is sooo good and am actually surprised i didnt fall asleep cuz its now nearly midnight and have officially been up for 24hours(so tired don't even no why i just told you that! lol)
it woke me up thank you for a great fic

[momm2five]

OMGosh!! I've officially added you to my little list of *rip my heart out and stomp on it* authors!! LOL!

Wow, great story - very painful and beautiful, and just great!

I hope there's more . . .

[jackfan2]

OOH! Loved it!! Positively loved it! Evil McKay.. ah.. I didn't like that bit, not because it didn't work, but because I love McKay.. lol.. I loved in 'The Long Good-bye' how he let out this litte romantic sigh when John and Elizabeth kissed *albiet possessed at the time*. It was so endearing.

But you really got the voices down very well. Hope you'll do more!