I really liked this. Your characterizations are great and Verity is cute. I was amused that she couldn't remember which twin she was with, and liked George reflecting on her relationship (or lack thereof) with Fred. Nice job.
I liked this very much! I know that some people don't care for the Weasley twins, but I like them. They're so dangerous, even when they're not trying to be; they just haven't figured that out yet. ;)
Yeah, that's a really good way of looking at the twins. I don't hate them (I like _Snape_, so I can't be picky about my characters' youths), but I do hope that they mature and realize that they've been hurting people. I'd be interested in reading how they reacted to that...
OMG, wow. I didn't even think that, of course Fred and George sold Malfoy one of the key elements in his evil-death-eating-plan. Wow, the guilt they must be feeling! Very impressive, my dear.
Very well written. And the fact that Verity couldn't remember which twin she'd gotten with really amuses me. It sounds like something I would totally do.
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Yeah, I hope that the twins are feeling guilty. If they get their act together they'll be valuable against the Death Eaters.
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Very well written. And the fact that Verity couldn't remember which twin she'd gotten with really amuses me. It sounds like something I would totally do.
...*runs away*
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