Fic: Family Remains [1/1]

[autumnrae89]

Title: Family remains. [1/1]
Author: Rae
Rating: G
Characters/Pairings: Chloe, Lois, Davis and Clark; Past Chloe/Clark, Chloe/Jimmy, Chloe/Davis and Clark/Lois.
Warnings/Spoilers: Set around 8x19 and written with those spoilers in mind but no direct mention of them.
Disclaimer: DC Comics/The CW own and reserve all rights to these characters and I

Comments

[saavikam77]

Awwww!! I absolutely adored the ice cream fight, and the fact that they went to bat for each other. ^_^ Just awesome.

[autumnrae89]

Seems like such a waste. The ice cream. Maybe it's cause I'm hungry. :P

Lois came to SV for Chloe! Why didn't they carry on with the awesome cuz!love?!

[svgurl]

Aww, that was cute! I like how you write Chloe and Lois and how they're always there for each other.

“Lana.” Chloe gritted out.

“Bless you?” Lois raised her eyebrows.

LOL That cracked me up. I could see it in my head too. :)

The ice cream fight was nice, as was Chloe going to talk to Clark while Lois confronts Davis.

And the ending was very sweet.

Wonderful job!

[autumnrae89]

As it turns out, much harder than it looks. Christ, it was like a nature thing to put a rivalry between them and I hate that. I miss classic!Chlo-Lo. :(

Yeah, I couldn't help that one. :P

You know, that confronting Davis thing was going to be a fic in itself. It actually was going to make Davis turn into Doomsday and go after Lois and thus bring her into the game and you know... But I decided here was better. :D

I would love for that to happen on the show, like if one of the girls had a really bad day, they'd just go and curl up with the other one. I think they would do that. If they were still as close as when Lois arrived. *Mutters murderously at PTB*

[psychme]

Aw. This made me feel all warm inside. Lovely job showing their history and their love for one another.

[autumnrae89]

Thank you! That's great. :D

It's sad we don't get more Chloe and Lois pre-SV history, I would love to have seen an episode about that early on.

[januaried]

YAY! This is such a great story, Rae. Exactly how it should be - and how it is in canon. =D

[autumnrae89]

OMG ICON LOVE.

Canon? THEY NEVER GAVE US CHLO-LO CANON. :( Oh sorry, I was having latent rage and no pre-series Chlo-Lo being shown.

I'd love for at least one part of the 'present' stuff to happen. Just to get the cousins back on track.

*HUGGLESMISHES*

Thank you for the lovely comments.

[emeraldstag]

Wow! Awesome job, Rae. The strength of their bond really shows throughout. ♥

I love the pacing of the story, and those two are adorably cute together. I want the show to have them hang out more now. D: