[MitS] 009 - When you tease me the way you do
My little darling I'm a tangled mess
When you tease me the way you do
& what it would be like I can only guess
If you'd please me like I wanna please you
Well show me a friendship that's pure and chaste
And I'll show you and engine that's dying to race
( Pulling in the warm air in the loft her chest rose... )
When you tease me the way you do
& what it would be like I can only guess
If you'd please me like I wanna please you
Well show me a friendship that's pure and chaste
And I'll show you and engine that's dying to race
( Pulling in the warm air in the loft her chest rose... )
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I've already told you the specific sentences and word phrasings that made me glee over AIM, but I still have to glee some more. They really are a lot of fun to write and I love their banter. Who would have known that it would come from two characters that were killed off? Great job with this one, it's the perfect balance of being sweet without being overly sappy. I also really like how you kept them firmly grounded in Heroes canon and mentioned the paintings that Isaac doesn't remember. It's the perfect note to remind the reader of what is to come.
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