Week 1 -- Trust Everyone, but Cut the Cards

[idekmybffjill]

“My name’s Jasper Callahan, what’s yours

Comments

[whipchick]

This is such a neat world! Nice job showing the immediate surroundings of these guys and their relationship while still showing that there's a whole world around them.

[idekmybffjill]

Thank you. :) It's hard balancing the details of the world along with their relationship, at times -- especially since it's ground I haven't really covered, before.

[morettaallstar]

Ok, I really liked this. I'd like to know more about the universe, about how Jasper got there, about how Mitchel became senator, where it all goes from here.
Politics is going to get in the way, isn't it?

[idekmybffjill]

Politics is most definitely going to get in the way. ;)

Thank you. <3 There's a lot I do know about this world, but this is several years before the timeline I'm most intimately familiar with. So it'd be nice to explore this portion of it. :)

[mamas_minion]

Great story, love the interactions of these characters. will hopefully get to see more of this world.

[idekmybffjill]

Hopefully! I think Mitchel wants me to explore more of this earlier part of his timeline -- I haven't done as much with it as I'd have liked, in the past. :)

Thank you for your comments. :)

[sinnamongirl]

Ooh, politics! So awful but so intriguing at the same time. Good job with this!

[idekmybffjill]

Aww, thanks! Politics and I are a funny thing. I insist on writing politicians. I actually fucking hate politics. xD

That is why it's been so hard for me to get to know Mitchel, though, who eats, sleeps, breathes politics whereas Jasper seems to have a life outside of it. :)

Thank you for commenting. :D

[alycewilson]

Am I wrong in thinking you played before under a different name? These characters sound familiar to me.

[idekmybffjill]

I have played under other names before, yes. :)

I was actually hoping to stay away from these guys but I apparently can't.