Elixir

[kamino]

Pairing: Madden Twins
Rating: R
POV: Third person.
Author: My friend, revelindischord.
Description: "His bloodlust had been quenched but now he needed someone to sate a different type of hunger that taunted him."
Disclaimer: Don't know, didn't happen.
Archived: identicest.

Comments

[mmcfan4life]

Oh wow. That was...that made me so sad. I just..poor Joel. But Benji has no choice, he's one of them now and he knows it. He only will do Joel harm if he stays. I'm scared of what the future holds for them now though. I love this story, you are doing a great job with it and I can't wait for more. <3

[joelnbenji4ever]

*Blink* Wow.. Benji diiied? *Pouts* Aww! I feel tears in my eyes! Thats soo sad, Or did he not die? He is a vamp so that wouldnt kill him.. Im confusing myself lol.. But great chapters! *Claps* Bravo!

[evasiveness]

Noooooooo. I didn't want Benji to die. *Sniffs* I wanted Joel to become a vampire too, then they could have lived happily ever after.

...Okay, so not every story goes like Cinderella.

[evasiveness]

Wait up... Is he dead or not?! *Is confused*

Anyway, I left out the part that... I really like this story. I haven't read any vamp fics in ages. Thank you so much for this story.

Maybe there is more? *Crosses fingers*

[kamino]

He can't die... he's faking his death.

[evasiveness]

Ah, alright. Lol. Thanks for clearing that up for me.

[spikepuppet69]

Oh noo! Poor Joel, but Benji had to leave. I'm sad because he felt nothing for the brother he once loved :(

I loved the chapter BTW it was sad, but good! I can't wait until the next one!

[lzybrunette]

ooooooo
whole new twist.
this is awesome.
it's such a tragedy though, how benji wants to hold on so bad, but he can't. almost makes me cry.
great job, thank you for writing this

asha