This will be a long and embarrassing comment so I apologize in advance. u___u EVERYTHING ABOUT THIS FIC IS INCREDIBLE; I actually forced myself to read slower mid-way through because I didn't want it to end!!
Chanyeol leverages the momentum of his fall and launches himself at Baekhyun with a roar. Baekhyun screeches, and then they’re bowling down the trail with their skis locked. omg, this is the most hysterical image ever. This Chanyeol is the best THE BEST THE BEST, ahhh! I don't think I've ever had so much fun reading a fic before.
Jongin barely waits until they’ve gone ten feet before he bats his eyelashes, and chirps, “I’m Baekhyun.” “I’m not even ashamed, you disrespectful brat,” says Baekhyun. “He was that good-looking.” “I’m ashamed,” says Jongdae. “You are an oil spill in human form.” “Okay break it up,” Kyungsoo claps. “Let’s change and get dinner.”ALL OF YOUR CHARACTERS ARE AMAZINGGG, wahhh; my body actually hurts right now from trying to keep in my laughter through all 13k. BAEKHYUN'S INDIGNATION AT GETTING THROWN OFF A
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omg this is such ;_; a nice comment ;_; i can't even ;__; I'M SO GLAD YOU LIKED IT sob, especially the characterization o m g i was driving myself crazy, it's always the number one thing i focus on when i read fic so i'm so glad that my clumsy efforts worked out for you!!!! i love baekhyun and chanyeol and everyone soo much, this is so flattering to hear ♥
KRISYEOLBAEKTAO IS MY FAVOURITE OT4 well tied with chingu line ofc. i'm also really happy that you liked the ending stretch, because i was the whole time i was just like =_= rly this is the conflict. there was a point at like 6k when i wildly considered ditching everything b-but 6k is a big investment for me so ;_; i definitely plan on writing more!
me reading this: *squeals* .................... *squeals* ........................... *laughs* ......................... *squeals*
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awesome writing, great characterization, clever wordings, interesting story line, why are you so perfect? give me a quarter of your perfection and i can die happy
Just as said by the lady above, awesome characterization. Period. I can totally see them acting that way in real life.
And awesome writing as well. Chanyeol thinks it’s genuinely hilarious. It’s probably the closest his life will ever come to being a cheesy romcom-fuck ‘Winter Sonata’, this is a hit drama plot. He had laughed after reading the full magazine article, alone in their hostel room, but stupidly enough, he still can't get rid of the icy feeling that had froze all his busy plans for the race and has now settled low in the pit of his stomach.
Wow. Your fic in a nutshell. Brilliant. 13k+ of clever wordings and story lines.
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Chanyeol leverages the momentum of his fall and launches himself at Baekhyun with a roar. Baekhyun screeches, and then they’re bowling down the trail with their skis locked. omg, this is the most hysterical image ever. This Chanyeol is the best THE BEST THE BEST, ahhh! I don't think I've ever had so much fun reading a fic before.
Jongin barely waits until they’ve gone ten feet before he bats his eyelashes, and chirps, “I’m Baekhyun.”
“I’m not even ashamed, you disrespectful brat,” says Baekhyun. “He was that good-looking.”
“I’m ashamed,” says Jongdae. “You are an oil spill in human form.”
“Okay break it up,” Kyungsoo claps. “Let’s change and get dinner.”ALL OF YOUR CHARACTERS ARE AMAZINGGG, wahhh; my body actually hurts right now from trying to keep in my laughter through all 13k. BAEKHYUN'S INDIGNATION AT GETTING THROWN OFF A ( ... )
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KRISYEOLBAEKTAO IS MY FAVOURITE OT4 well tied with chingu line ofc. i'm also really happy that you liked the ending stretch, because i was the whole time i was just like =_= rly this is the conflict. there was a point at like 6k when i wildly considered ditching everything b-but 6k is a big investment for me so ;_; i definitely plan on writing more!
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me reading this:
*squeals*
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*squeals*
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*laughs*
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*squeals*
repeat.
awesome writing, great characterization, clever wordings, interesting story line, why are you so perfect? give me a quarter of your perfection and i can die happy
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And awesome writing as well.
Chanyeol thinks it’s genuinely hilarious. It’s probably the closest his life will ever come to being a cheesy romcom-fuck ‘Winter Sonata’, this is a hit drama plot. He had laughed after reading the full magazine article, alone in their hostel room, but stupidly enough, he still can't get rid of the icy feeling that had froze all his busy plans for the race and has now settled low in the pit of his stomach.
Wow. Your fic in a nutshell. Brilliant. 13k+ of clever wordings and story lines.
Thank you ^^ Please write more <3
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