EXO || (feels like the crowd is sayin') gimme gimme more (Chanyeol/Tao)

Mar 26, 2013 10:12

(feels like the crowd is sayin') gimme gimme more
Chanyeol/Tao
NC-17, ~3.1k.
warnings: genderswap, frotteurism, exhibit./humil./reluct.

Chanyeol gropes Zitao on the train. (That's it, that's the fic.)

Zitao wants to roll her hips, wants to fuck herself against Chanyeol's leg, but they're still elbow to elbow with Tokyo's everyday commuters. )

p: chanyeol/tao, *fic, c: chanyeol, f: exo, c: tao

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g_odalisque13 March 26 2013, 20:24:14 UTC
Holy fucking shit.
Bvihdjfbihdiwjd
Never has taoyeol better hotter tbh
I loved chanyeol and her dirt talk and her wanting other people to see zitao
And then zitao being mortified, but still into it and just unf
I can't right now
And i'm reading this on the train! /wails
I hope you write more things like this. Lmao.
Memming <3

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idolkiller March 26 2013, 22:23:01 UTC
omgggggg thank you for this flattering comment *____* I LOVE CHANYEOL'S BRATTY MOUTH TOO my favourite part always (or maybe tao is my favourite part......... sob). i'm dying at you reading it on the train, ~mood setting~. THANK YOU FOR READING i'm happy you liked it :D

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g_odalisque13 March 27 2013, 02:58:21 UTC
/reads again
seriously
more things like this, please
idek if i'm asking for more genderswap, more taoyeol, or more sex on trains. idek! but. yes.

(and wow typos in my first comment! sorry about that lol OTL)

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idolkiller March 28 2013, 10:31:25 UTC
crying omg.... yes to the first two, NOT SURE ABOUT MORE OF THAT LAST ONE THO ;;

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bauci March 26 2013, 20:45:59 UTC
So there's a kink I never knew I had.
Hot, great pacing and delicious.

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idolkiller March 26 2013, 22:18:23 UTC
hehehe excellent, mission accomplished
thanks so much for your kind comment, so flattering ;;;;

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climmy March 27 2013, 00:09:41 UTC
This is one of those moments were I don't know what to say because I loved it and I'm dying because I love it.

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idolkiller March 28 2013, 10:32:56 UTC
sobbing WELL I'M GLAD thank you for reading ;____; <3

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daeseol March 27 2013, 00:35:53 UTC
shit omfggg hngg

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lessvocals March 27 2013, 01:41:37 UTC
ICWUDT :))

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idolkiller March 28 2013, 10:33:12 UTC
kaslfkasdlfkj tyyy :')

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jorge_callas March 27 2013, 03:03:09 UTC
Weird porn!

I loved it. I don't know if they're hotter as they are or in another universe where they're all girls. Chanyeol would continue to wear large hooded pullovers as a girl, and maybe a fluffy hat with flaps over the ears. I really liked the dynamic between them, Chanyeol is so pushy but very tender at the end and Tao's undying crush on senpai.

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jorge_callas March 27 2013, 17:04:42 UTC
I was thinking about this again. The porn really came alive because it was so densely described.

I read it in the morning and it was a great pick me up all day.

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idolkiller March 28 2013, 10:36:51 UTC
omg your nice comments TT_____TT CHANYEOL THE MOST BALLER GIRL with those hoodies with fabric animal ears lmao. thanks so much for your feedback (and for coming back?? ;~;) it's rly great to hear! uwaaaa i'm really glad you enjoyed it TT________TT <3

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jorge_callas March 28 2013, 14:38:56 UTC
yes! baller is the right word. tao is so... i dunno, come and get it? it's irresistable and i'm straight.

i'll be coming back again and again!

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