Nth Life: CONCRIT POST!

Jul 29, 1999 15:15

Belated!


Cat is a tricky character to post for, in that -- well, in a lot of ways he's a typical eleven twelve year old boy. Consequently, he doesn't have much use for journals, and certainly isn't bound to write down his most private thoughts. He isn't even like to have to cross out or slip with that sort of thing, since he's -- not reticent, but just not the sort to talk out his problems.

This is especially because, as the author has confirmed, he has mild autism which effectively makes it incredibly difficult for him to talk about things, apparently the more important/serious/etc, the harder.

SO, ER, I'm trying to figure out how to express character and that he's, well, feeling things and going through things, while working with his limitations on a journal system.

Please be patient with me, but even more, please give me any advice or criticism that you can think of!

I am very open to constructive crit! I want to know if I'm doing it wrong, if there's something I can do, if he's coming off flat and I'm using his -- er, what I've said -- as an excuse.

Also comment here if you'd like to plot something, but for some reason, are allergic to e-mailing me. :3 ♥

Comments screened, anonymous is go.

actually cat gets carsick, how is my driving, ooc

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