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idontbeleive

Rocking The Universe

Sep 12, 2004 21:02

Rocking the universe ~ A short story by Harrison Ollif(Incomplete ( Read more... )

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somefearnone September 12 2004, 18:09:42 UTC

You misused A LOT of words.

gc_fan_313 September 12 2004, 18:14:04 UTC

"wonderful, something for everyone to read"

~G-money TIMES mag.

going about 80 down some highway which he'd never seen before, as he grabbed her hand for the first time in almost a year.
^i thought that was cute, go harrison!

i cant wait to see the next chapter! I'M GONNA BUY THE BOOK!

~gina

idontbeleive September 12 2004, 18:16:23 UTC

Correct me then Rachel, thats what I love about you I need you ;[. Thanks Gina.

P.s. I wrote this in about 5 minutes

why? xrachel_08x September 14 2004, 14:01:15 UTC

why'd you change "chapter one"? it did have stuff about maryah in there? didn't it? *nosy*

Re: why? idontbeleive September 14 2004, 16:29:49 UTC

It did, and will, I'm writing still. I wasn't talking to you Rachel W. I was talking to Rachel J.Duh~

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