ALICE I'M SORRY THIS COMMENT TOOK SO LONG x___x omg it took me ages to find time to actually sit down and comment on this, and omg!!!! i already told you how much i loved this but!!! IT. IS. SO. CUTE. i love everything!!! you did it for the vine!!! ALIIIIIIICIE.
okay, so where to start. urghhh, i know you keep saying jinhwan pov is painful, BUT YOU DID IT SO WELL. i really love how trivial jinhwan finds junhwe's crush in the beginning? like he's so preoccupied with it passing, not thinking much of it, and omg it makes my heartache a little that junhwe likes him so much and jinhwan just off-hand finds it cute. and the imagery of puppy 15 year old junhwe following jinhwan like a lost child sobs. this is canon idc yg can't take this away from me :C and just jinhwaaaan... i love how you made him so considerate, soft, and accepting. really complacent? like you set up really well the fact that jinhwan is just... really caring towards everyone. the bit where they all go to sleep in jinhwan's bed, and the cuddling >___< i love golden trio
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ALICE NO ONE WILL EVER BE ABLE TO WRITE JUNHWAN AS CUTE AS YOU DO. NO ONE. I love how in ikon fandom everyone complains about writing jinhwan but goes ahead and writes him anyway lol (I’m guilty of this too, ofc u__u) You did a great job! Like reet said, thank you for building everything around events we recognise, your fic is canon for me now. It’s actually what happens.
Where do I start? Your junhwe is adorable, such a kid. I sometimes forget how young they are, two survival shows having aged them 4903021 years and all. Junhwe is so embarrassing regardless of whether he’s observing or being observed u__u “careful hyung, i- we- the rest of the team i mean, don’t want you getting sick right when the show starts,” junhwe says bashfully. you_tried.jpg (and yet it’s super sweet how he cares so much for jinhwan!!) I feel like this paragraph just sums him up so well:
he's never come to jinhwan's bed at night. jinhwan's not sure if it's some weird sort of teenage insistence to show that he can be independent or if he's actually
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in the end, junhwe is nothing but an embarrassing, awkward teenager who pretends to be more stoic than he is but secretly cares about all his friends (especially jinhwan, ofc)
tbh the cute maknae position was never junhwe's position to begin with since he seems so prickly (and awkward) initially u__u junhwe is very annoyed by donghyuk bc he gets all the attention and love from jinhwan (but he secretly loves him as his bff bc let's face it, donghyuk is probably his closest friend)
what's the point of writing a (very painful) canon junhwan fic if you can't include the win finale scene?? gack :____; you compliment me too much.
this fic wouldn't have been able to have been finished without you correcting my million typos, helping me on those scenes when i practically gave up, and beta-ing last minute as i ran to you!!
omg these two, junhoe is such an awkward boy sometimes idk how he does it bobby snickers from behind his phone and it jostles jinhwan into his armpit which is absolutely filthy and he never wants to smell something so gross ever again. oh my god bobby why is he such a dudebro lol jinhwan how could you be such an oblivious hyung how rude of you. but ofc hanbin worried about it, the 3kim parts were cute!
junhwe has the tendency to follow jinhwan around like a small child. in the dorms, he'll trail around him from time to time, following him from room to room, attempting not to be obvious about it, but in actuality he's hopelessly so. oh my god he so would, like he'd duck behind a door a second too late if jinhwan turned around or something. he's not supposed to be indulging in junhwe's crush. they're both trainees and junhwe is young. inviting the fifteen year old to sit next to him isn't the how he's supposed to stop his pointless infatuation in its early stages. (and to stop adding to the increasingly long list of hanbin’s worries).
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tbh it's a true miracle how goo junhwe has survived up until now, but his awkwardness is his charming point uwu. golden trio is always super qt!! i actually love them quite a lot (second to junhwan ofc).
and poor junhoe that kid, you can't act territorial if you haven't actually staked a claim THE ACCURACY IN THIS STATEMENT u___u yes junhwe, please learn you can't get all defensive about it when you aren't dating jinhwan
a junhwe or bobby fic just can't not have the awkward bobhwe interactions, it's what i truly live for, to see them both suffer.
lmao what do you mean by "relatively unforgettable"
yes junhwe using donghyuk's words (which actually jinhwan told him but i didn't manage to fit that in here so.......)
thank you so much for this comment >___< yes jinhwan has been living in denial for most of the time he's liked junhwe, mainly bc he still kind of seems him as the awkward 15 year old boy when he first came!! ack im so glad you think i characterized jinhwan well, i was worried about that this entire time and i found
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okay, so where to start. urghhh, i know you keep saying jinhwan pov is painful, BUT YOU DID IT SO WELL. i really love how trivial jinhwan finds junhwe's crush in the beginning? like he's so preoccupied with it passing, not thinking much of it, and omg it makes my heartache a little that junhwe likes him so much and jinhwan just off-hand finds it cute. and the imagery of puppy 15 year old junhwe following jinhwan like a lost child sobs. this is canon idc yg can't take this away from me :C and just jinhwaaaan... i love how you made him so considerate, soft, and accepting. really complacent? like you set up really well the fact that jinhwan is just... really caring towards everyone. the bit where they all go to sleep in jinhwan's bed, and the cuddling >___< i love golden trio ( ... )
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Where do I start? Your junhwe is adorable, such a kid. I sometimes forget how young they are, two survival shows having aged them 4903021 years and all. Junhwe is so embarrassing regardless of whether he’s observing or being observed u__u “careful hyung, i- we- the rest of the team i mean, don’t want you getting sick right when the show starts,” junhwe says bashfully. you_tried.jpg (and yet it’s super sweet how he cares so much for jinhwan!!) I feel like this paragraph just sums him up so well:
he's never come to jinhwan's bed at night. jinhwan's not sure if it's some weird sort of teenage insistence to show that he can be independent or if he's actually ( ... )
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in the end, junhwe is nothing but an embarrassing, awkward teenager who pretends to be more stoic than he is but secretly cares about all his friends (especially jinhwan, ofc)
tbh the cute maknae position was never junhwe's position to begin with since he seems so prickly (and awkward) initially u__u junhwe is very annoyed by donghyuk bc he gets all the attention and love from jinhwan (but he secretly loves him as his bff bc let's face it, donghyuk is probably his closest friend)
what's the point of writing a (very painful) canon junhwan fic if you can't include the win finale scene?? gack :____; you compliment me too much.
this fic wouldn't have been able to have been finished without you correcting my million typos, helping me on those scenes when i practically gave up, and beta-ing last minute as i ran to you!!
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bobby snickers from behind his phone and it jostles jinhwan into his armpit which is absolutely filthy and he never wants to smell something so gross ever again. oh my god bobby why is he such a dudebro lol
jinhwan how could you be such an oblivious hyung how rude of you. but ofc hanbin worried about it, the 3kim parts were cute!
junhwe has the tendency to follow jinhwan around like a small child.
in the dorms, he'll trail around him from time to time, following him from room to room, attempting not to be obvious about it, but in actuality he's hopelessly so. oh my god he so would, like he'd duck behind a door a second too late if jinhwan turned around or something.
he's not supposed to be indulging in junhwe's crush. they're both trainees and junhwe is young. inviting the fifteen year old to sit next to him isn't the how he's supposed to stop his pointless infatuation in its early stages. (and to stop adding to the increasingly long list of hanbin’s worries). ( ... )
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and poor junhoe that kid, you can't act territorial if you haven't actually staked a claim THE ACCURACY IN THIS STATEMENT u___u yes junhwe, please learn you can't get all defensive about it when you aren't dating jinhwan
a junhwe or bobby fic just can't not have the awkward bobhwe interactions, it's what i truly live for, to see them both suffer.
lmao what do you mean by "relatively unforgettable"
yes junhwe using donghyuk's words (which actually jinhwan told him but i didn't manage to fit that in here so.......)
thank you so much for this comment >___< yes jinhwan has been living in denial for most of the time he's liked junhwe, mainly bc he still kind of seems him as the awkward 15 year old boy when he first came!! ack im so glad you think i characterized jinhwan well, i was worried about that this entire time and i found ( ... )
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