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[idyll]

I'm sort of desperately in need of a distraction* (as if you couldn't tell from the two other posts I've made today). Since I've also been turning myself in circles as far as fic goes (dear brain: please to be stopping the overthinking), I figured I could attempt to kill two birds with one stone

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[idyll]

The Lanteans are so clean that it seems borderline obsessive to Ronon. He understands regular bathing, really. He even gets coming back to the city after falling into a muddy ravine and heading right for the showers. But he doesn't understand their intolerance for a little dirt, a little grime, like the kind that comes from spending half a day digging holes for fence posts on New Athos.

It's natural and normal, the detritus of being out there and doing something meaningful beyond fighting, killing and dying

[dessert_first]

::explodes::

So, so hot! Mmmm. I love all the details and the characterization, Ronon's perspective and all the rich sensual details. And John just kind of endearingly following along with whatever, be it canteen surrender or dirty sex on demand (and man, who could blame him?).

[idyll]

Thank you! I had fun with this one, that's for sure. :)

[arsenicjade]

I love the way you can take a small moment and say something really significant about a character. Also, how spot on your voices are.

[idyll]

MWAH! Thank you, my mush!

[poisontaster]

Gnnngh.

Gnnngh, damn.

[idyll]

Thanks! :)

[mikou]

Sometimes I'm very literal.

As long as you can make it work...

Yeah, you did. I'm speechless *off to re-read and salivate*

[idyll]

Thanks, sweetie! Glad you liked it. :)

[chatona]

That's just really, really gorgeous *purrs happily*

[idyll]

:) Thanks!

[moonriddler_mim]

oh wow yeah. a lil' dirt never hurt nobody. *_* *wipes drool*