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[ieat_babies666]

As I sit alone in the darkness of nite
The wind blows so cold against my pale skin
Wondering where you are at
My thoughts are with you but sadly to say your's are not
Wondering what I did to lose your love
Was it even me at all
To lose are love is to lose it all

ok I lost it but there you go you guys give me your thoughs about my random poet

Comments

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not bad =]

hummm

[ieat_babies666]

you really think so becuase I was outside when I wrote that and it was cold lol

[faded_star_]

yeah it's pretty good.