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[FANFIC] Like Pinning Butterflies (Ten)

Sep 23, 2010 21:29

Title: Like Pinning Butterflies (Ten)
Author: ienvy
Fandom: South Park
Pairing: Craig/Tweek
Rating: NC-17 (just to be safe, no smut but plenty of violence)
Summary: Craig Tucker is sick. And Craig Tucker is madly, irrevocably obsessed with Tweek Tweak.
Warnings: This story is NOT for those who are easily disturbed or upset. This story is intended to ( Read more... )

!fanfic, like pinning butterflies

Comments 2

Oh god oh god oh god. pantheren September 25 2010, 15:54:17 UTC

Fascinating. <3

There are so many things I'm in love with in this chapter, I don't even know where to start. No, but wait, I'll do it chronologically.

First, Craig's pseudo-smile. It . . . it gave me this weird excited happy feeling inside. It made me very amused and giddy and happy. I thought it was a perfect thing for him to have.

"Craig was one of those people, so dead inside that hardly anything on the outside really worked." This line was a amazing. I shivered, seriously. It gave me this dark, black hole feeling that was so right.

Then, Craig's repeated confessions, his child-like logic, his smile. Basically, that whole last section was so dark, so unmerciful and so beautiful; perfect for leading up to Craig fixing his heart.

As always, another astonishing chapter. Keep up the good work. :D

gabegilbs October 2 2010, 21:08:00 UTC

This is so well developed. I came across it by accident and I couldn't be happier that I did. It so original and visual. I love the atmosphere.
The back and forth of hope and despair is great, works well and not tiring at all. And the way he continues to off people is colorful due to your descriptiveness. I wonder whether you will continue to bring Kenny back or if this will be the final time?
For a bit there, mainly when the church was first introduced, I was thinking maybe that the supernatural was coming into play and that Craig was being possessed but not anymore.
Even through al that's happened I can't pull from your writing that Tweek hates Craig for all that he's done and it makes the possibilities almost infinite.

Astounding work. Please update. ^_^
Sorry didn't mean to write so much.