[FANFIC] Like Pinning Butterflies (Thirteen)

[ienvy]

Title: Like Pinning Butterflies (Thirteen)
Author: ienvy
Fandom: South Park
Pairing: Craig/Tweek
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Craig Tucker is sick. And Craig Tucker is madly, irrevocably obsessed with Tweek Tweak.
Warnings: This story is NOT for those who are easily disturbed or upset. This story is intended to be very morbid and macabre and will contain

Comments

[goregeousjunkie]

Whoa, I thought Tweek was dead from the last chapter! :O Guess not, which is a very good thing!

From my stand point it seems Craig has come to realized that he was...crazy? Nah, he knew he was crazy, maybe just not the extent of it. And now that he knows Tweek will never be his he doesn't really look forward to living anymore. That's what I think anyways lol!

"Maybe we can die together" is something like Craig is fantasying about of himself and Tweek. Since he can't have him, he doesn't want anyone else to have him. This does go for Kenny, and he is aware he will be coming back. He can only dream of him and Tweek in another plane where only him and Tweek are only together and they can be happy.

And btw, your Author Note of what pairing we like to see next. I honestly want to see another Creek out of you, but if you want to go for a new pairing I'd would like to see you take on Kyman. If you can make this literature I am sure you can take on that pairing.

I can't wait to see the Epilogue. Don't take too long 'kay!

[ienvy]

<3 You've got it right for most of those things, actually. The epilogue(which is more of a chapter, I guess, but whatever) will help round things out and answer any questions/reconfirm any thoughts anyone has been having.

As for Kyman, I would take it on... I really would. Hm... I think I'll start up another drabble/request prompt thing instead.

It won't be too long. Hopefully~!

[pantheren]

You're going to make me cry, I swear. This is so beautiful and amazing. That's it; I'm in love. I'm making both you and this story my Valentine. Be prepared for roses.

For me, this really made me connect with both Tweek and Craig (but mostly Craig), because I know what it's like to feel dead inside. To not want to be alone with that inside of you. Really made me connect with the characters and plot more. <3

This is the best line in this chapter: his body covered in little gashes of love. Seriously.

Can't wait for the epilogue! :D And, honestly, I would love some Dip. I love it, but hardly anyone else does. :c

[ienvy]

<3 I'm so glad that you've connected so much to it. Even if you're gonna cry. It makes me so happy to see that you like it that much~<3333

And yes, I love that line beyond all reason~

Epilogue shouldn't be too far behind! And I'll consider it (I've never written it before). If you want, you can hit me up for it on the little prompt table thing I posted on slashpark. ;]

[pantheren]

:D I'm glad I made you happy! <3 I generally love anything that involves with crazies and psychotics, especially if they're Craig.

Goodness, that line is amazing. I looooove it.

I am most definitely reading the epilogue. And I will hit you up on slashpark; thanks for reminding me. I love Dip; it's so cute. X3 And, if you want to go for the depressed angle again, Dip is perfect for it. I mean, Damien is the son of Satan. He also blew up Pip, who's bullied. Perfect for angst and humour if you put the right twist on it.

[ext_397322]

so.. this is the end of the long story(though there would be the epilogue, anyway). I remember I said that I feel sad and pity for both of them at the previous chapter. And at the end, I am feeling much more sadness and, amazement. I do think that your story is AWESOME... it is really sad but beautiful! Both of their lives are damaged(since Craig actually damaged Tweek's), and it is a tragic that at the very last moment, both of them become 'empty' and their understandings are met, finally. My best line is 'gashes of love' too.. it summarizes the whole story and feelings well.

I appreciate you for writing such a wonderful story. I will wait for the epilogue and your other stories. Thank you! Have a nice day!

[gabegilbs]

I too thought Tweek was dead but I'm so happy that he isn't.
Finally it's like Craig has come out of a trance and seen what he was doing and how he was going about it all the wrong way. I hope that things can all work out for the end. My predictions is that Tweek won't want to be around Kenny because he blames himself in a way, or something like that. lol. I really am looking for the epilogue even if it means that the story is over. :) I agree with seeing you write another Creek but Stan and Craig is just so new and interesting to me. I'd love to see what you would do with them as a pairing. ^_^