Title: Like Pinning Butterflies (Fourteen)
Author:
ienvyFandom: South Park
Pairing: Craig/Tweek
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Craig Tucker is sick. And Craig Tucker is madly, irrevocably obsessed with Tweek Tweak.
Warnings: This story is NOT for those who are easily disturbed or upset. This story is intended to be very morbid and macabre and will contain
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My favorite part throughout the whole fic was when Craig rape Tweek on the ice pond. It was so epic and I just loved how Tweek tries to forget what was happening and pretending he was somewhere else.
I too am happy you complete your fic. Most good written fic you never see completed and I do encourage you to write more in the future. Until then, take care!
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Tweek really killed Kenny, that was both literal and a metaphor. The whole thing with him coming into the hospital holding Kenny's heart in his hand was a way for him to not only offer it up to Craig but also to be admitted as a crazy patient and to understand what Craig had gone through for him.
Remember that this has all had a huge twist on Tweek and now that Craig's safely locked away he has almost a Stockholm syndrome and wants to be with Craig because now it's almost like it's the only thing that matters, the only thing that can help him feel like he's whole again.
Thank you very much, I hope to see you around~! :3
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Well, Cartman's death was kind of wicked amazing, and "Craig cannot feel his limbs. Whether it is the water or Tweek’s gaze that robs him of his body, he can’t tell. Tweek is dragging both their corpses onto the shoreline, trembling as he collapses with exhaustion and hypothermia beside Craig." <3. This whole story was great.
omg.
Also: Thank you for introducing me to Ludo. oo. I love "Love Me Dead," while "Go-Getter Greg" is possibly still my favorite, hehe. :D
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I just brillancegasmed over the brilliance in this brilliant fic D= I'm restraining from posting nonsense gibberish in all capslock out of respect for your amazing work, but just know that inside I'm spewing all sorts of spelling errors in amazement.
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I really appreciate that~<3 And will use the word brillancegasm later in my life. lmao~
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OH MY GOD. DEGTRNseohxf;fffffffffffffffffgeriolh
*spazzflailfoamgurgle*
Oh my godddddddddddddddddddddaaaah. D8
.......
I... I tried pausing, for a minute, to at least try to think of something to utter other than mindless 'oh my god's, but I can't really. This is just amazing. You're amazing. I love you. You're my new favorite fucking person. D: Love you. So much.
..... Probably sound a bit like a creepy stalker, but.... SOMETHING TELLS ME YOU'RE KINDA OK WITH THESE HERE, HM?
*ahemcough*
Kenny's still my favorite.... u-u
I swore I'd cry a little if he didn't come back, at least once.
So.
Thank you for bringing him back, darling~ ;u;
Andum, sorry if this is a little hard to understand, but I just got done reading, and I'm just completely awestruck. D:
Have I mentioned I love you?
'Cause I do.
Andum
If Macabre wasn't like, my weakest subject, I'd totally be spamming you with half-assed fanart. :u
Hm... Yes... Going to end this now before it gets more creepy and long-winded... Yeah.... .O.
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I love you too! :D
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Yay~ ;u; I can't wait to see what you come up with next on your ventures as a writer. And I'd like to add you pretty much had me bouncing in my seat like a little spazz during the last couple chapters, aha. |D
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This is like, one of the best stories I have ever read, and it's a fan-fiction. I can't believe it, this story must be the epitome of all horror stories.
It has insanity, murder, gore, all the emotions you could ever hope for, it draws you in, makes you want more and more. It's so intense, and it never gets boring, and it's never overdone.
And I really love how at the end, Tweek is broken. All that purity and innocence is twisted and destroyed by all of the evil things he has been subjected to. It's heart-wrenchingly sad, yet so beautiful.
I just, if I tried to write everything that I love about this story it could fill a whole novel.
Thank you so much for writing this.
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