Heiwa~ Sekai no doko ni itemo [Prologue]

[iffahsyuqaira]

 

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[theivorykeys]

FIRST?! YAY!
OHMYFREEEEEEEKIGGAWSH! THIS WAS AWESOME!
agjiugknjjsdkgdklrhsdgklhiht!
YOU HAVE TO WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER QUICKER!

[hyuuchiha_miki]

OMG, you fast. XD

[theivorykeys]

I just happened to be replying a comment. (:

[iffahsyuqaira]

omedetou~! :D

alright, I'll be working on it soon but I'm so lazy now XD

[emerald_love_96]

what????????? 0___0
I should kill the culprit soon XD
and, YABU!!! NO~~ TT0TT
I hope this story will satisfy me more ^^
and do you know why your update NEVER appeared on my f-page? :/

[hyuuchiha_miki]

and do you know why your update NEVER appeared on my f-page? :/
And I thought I was the only one.

IFFAH, YOU SEE?!

[iffahsyuqaira]

ne, how should I know??? Blame LJ! Not me, heh XD

[iffahsyuqaira]

eh? the previous one don't? ^^

ne, idk...why Lj hate me that much...*cry* anyway, I'll try to check it later.. :D

[hyuuchiha_miki]

I haven't read the story yet (wait ah, still doing Christmas stuffs. XD) but this line from the summary.

an orphanage from the result of war was still trying to adapt herself to the new life
It should be orphan instead cuz you are addressing it to a person. Orphanage is an institution (or place).

AND LOL. The miserable title. XD

[hyuuchiha_miki]

Not far from them, Okamoto and Arioka were hugging each other, in sitting position too.
You cannot believe that I laughed. XD

His body was turned to face his back automatically and eventually his sight was fixed on something strange.
Gasp. What is it??? XD

Yabu screamed out his lung.
*lungs. LOL. SCREAM YABU, SCREAM FOR YOUR LIFE. MWAHAHA XD

:D Eh, you've got some mistakes in your story, did you double read it?

[iffahsyuqaira]

lol...I believe it :D honestly, I find it cute too...cuz I can't really imagine them in such state ^^

I think I've triple read it...but yeah, I'm not perfect...hehe...feel free to point it out ne? I'm glad to know which one it was...

[iffahsyuqaira]

fixed! thank you~~ :D

[iffahsyuqaira]

Ketupat is nice...but I love nasi himpit more. if you don't know, nasi himpit is like ketupat but the different is that the rice is put into a plastic sac instead of coconut leave..

Ah, I made you cry...I never expect too...

Anyway, thanks Rui-chan <333

[iffahsyuqaira]

Rui-chan!! I miss you too!!!!

We haven't talk for some time ne? I'm sorry, I disappear for a while ^^

[blozzom_zone]

Iffa-chan...~ or should I start to address you Syuqaira since now onwards??XDD I was the first reader, I'm sure but due to some technical reason I couldn't be the first commenter >< *sigh* oh well, here I am now :D

Oh my...poor Syuqaira *hugs her* but as expected from you, you were so imaginative nee, your background story...><

and poor JUMP >< got an attack in their very first day on world tour >< *pats them*

At the center, both Yabu and Yaotome pretended to act calm, thinking of a way out for all of them - not only the members, but the audience too and as expected YabuHika would always be the leader and co-leader in the group ><

BOOOOMMMM!!!!

It sounded so near to his ears. Yabu was jerked as he never heard any sound as loud as that. His body was turned to face his back automatically and eventually his sight was fixed on something strange. Yabu screamed out his lung.

After that, everything went dark. somehow I got shiver reading this part ><

can't wait for the update Iffah-chan:D ganbatte ne^^

[iffahsyuqaira]

Iffah-chan is definitely cuter ne ^^ *pats you*

poor Syuqaira *she hugs you back* well, I got the story from my reading ^^

YabuHika as always ne? i can't leave them XDD

thank you, Hara-chan~~~ wait ne!! I'm in lazy mood now xPP

[blozzom_zone]

I'll try my best to get the first for the next~! XDD

haha I see^^ but it's nice really, it touched my heart reading Syuqaira's part:,)

lol because they really have that leader and co-leader image ne^^ plus they're the best friend ever ne?:)

haha, no worries, I'll wait patiently:) since me myself are kinda busy preparing for the end term tests ><"