The atmosphere of a sunny day, the incredibly warm and yet bittersweet tone of the narration. How carefully you portrayed all three children and Denmark's inner thoughts as well.
Oh, thank you so much! I love the idea of the little 19th century family, but I admit to feeling weird with original characters making up exactly half of this story's cast haha. I'm glad you liked it!
Awww, this is really sweet. I loved the way you wrote the kids. Denmark embellishing what Norway says to them so as to make them happy is really sweet, as is the image of them all curled up with their daisy crowns. There's loads of fic about Denmark as a bad guardian, so it's nice to see something more positive for a change.
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The atmosphere of a sunny day, the incredibly warm and yet bittersweet tone of the narration. How carefully you portrayed all three children and Denmark's inner thoughts as well.
Simple and beautiful, I loved it!
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