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( axis powers hetalia ) his eyes (follow your eyes)

Mar 23, 2011 16:52

Title: His Eyes (Follow Your Eyes)
Series: Axis Powers: Hetalia
Characters/Pairings: Denmark, Norway. Den/Nor.
Rating: PG-13 for heavily alluded sexual content.
Summary: There is nothing strange about sleeping in the same bed, unless of course you want more. And when your bedmate is your ex, that may just be a given. Part one of either two of three ( Read more... )

!fandom - axis powers hetalia, &character - norway, #story - his eyes (follow your eyes), &character - denmark, +pairing - denmark/norway

Comments 33

fireblazie March 23 2011, 22:50:17 UTC

Ahhhhhh. This was - oh, it was bone-tingling and goosebump-inducing and all that good stuff. Denmark's doubt and desire for more and all of his conflicting emotions were so striking, and you conveyed that really well. I was sort of just breathless through the whole thing.

And, gosh, this line: His knee is pressed up between Norway's legs. Norway's arms are pressed around him, fingers pulling at his hair. It's not all he wants. Not even close. It was just filled with so much yearning, I just, I can't even begin to describe how much I love this whole thing.

Stop distracting me with fic

parron March 24 2011, 00:19:27 UTC

O- oh, thank you so much! If you liked it, then there's no way I can apologize for the distraction, haha.

monychan March 24 2011, 01:49:27 UTC

HNNNG. That was chilling.
Poor Denmark, struggling with his emotions so much.
Can't wait to read more.

parron March 24 2011, 04:21:44 UTC

Thank you!

cattiechaos March 24 2011, 04:28:50 UTC

This is a really nice mood piece, you know c: Perfect for a chilly day.

parron March 24 2011, 04:51:39 UTC

Thank you so much!

cattiechaos March 24 2011, 05:20:23 UTC

No problem! ( > w > ) And since I've already bugged you...can I ask you for some tips on writing the Nordics? ; 3; I've never written them before and am wary of getting their personalities really wrong ._.

parron March 24 2011, 15:28:01 UTC

Oh! Um, I can try? What kind of things are you looking for?

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kalinoke March 24 2011, 04:58:30 UTC

Its soo captivating! Can't wait till the next part <3
Thanks for sharing~

parron March 24 2011, 04:59:00 UTC

Thank you! For using that icon, too!!

lost_hitsu March 24 2011, 07:28:25 UTC

I simply can't get enough of how you portray these two and their relationship. This was beautiful and bittersweet and it was so them (at least as I see them in my headcanon).

Really looking forward to the next part.

parron March 24 2011, 15:49:12 UTC

Hee, thank you so much!!