( axis powers hetalia ) his eyes (follow your eyes) - chapter two

[parron]

Title: His Eyes (Follow Your Eyes)
Series: Axis Powers: Hetalia
Characters/Pairings: Denmark, Norway. Den/Nor.
Rating: PG-16 for heavily implied and mentioned sexual content.
Summary: There is nothing strange about sleeping in the same bed, unless of course you want more. And when your bedmate is your ex, that may just be a given. Part two of three

Comments

[indict]

dat toast

No OK really hnnngh this is such a great fic ohhh w;A;w I love your writing style, it works really well for the story and ohhhhh the characterization. The small details like Denmark's house and the nicknames are wonderful.

Also they are just so lame you think they would understand each other by now but of course not because they are losers.

[parron]

NORWAY: RUNS OUT ON BOYFRIEND BUT NOT BEFORE STEALING THE REST OF BREAKFAST. HE IS JUST THAT CHEAP.

hahahahahahahahahaha understanding is for losers and swedes

[indict]

Well I mean look at the way he dresses those are not the clothes of a man who is willing to shop anywhere but a thrift store.

[parron]

I actually spent much of the last part of this chapter wincing over the fact that I implied Norway is about to spend money on a hotel room. I can't decide if he's either just that desperate, or actually just going to camp out in a park somewhere.

[lost_hitsu]

I swear I'll never tire of your characterisation of those two. It's heartbraking and fragile and makes me want to slap them both.

Lovely work.

[parron]

COMMUNICATION BETWEEN FRIENDS IS FOR LAMERS.

By which I mean, thank you very much! They really are a pair of morons, but hey.

[parron]

VGDFgdf Thank you! I'm not sure whether or not I should apologize for causing that reaction, though!

[shibbyone]

...and my comment just posted anonymously and I don't know why. Please ignore me and that comment. What I MEANT to say NOT anonymously was THIS IS FABULOUS. They're so auuugh why so stupid boys? Guh. There IS more, right? :D

[parron]

They are stupid, stupid losers, haha. And yes! There should be at least one more part, unless it gives me trouble and I draw it out again. But Norway will return the next day as promised!

[fireblazie]

Hello, mood whiplash! I saw this had been updated and got all bright and smiley and did my happy dance and then I started reading and you just kept ripping my heart to shreds arghhh

I love how you write! This is filled with all these lovely details and the feelings, oh, with Denmark feeling like he's going to be sick and the dark and the cold in his sunny kitchen, oh you two how can you be so stupid

I love it aaaallll ♥♥

[parron]

They are the stupidest and this is why we love them. Emotional maturity? FFFFFFFFF.

And I'm glad you liked! E- even with the mood lashings sorry about that haha.