Drabble: Moving On

Mar 28, 2013 08:11

the other side of the same story, a continuation of yesterday's Self-Inflicted Wounds.

Moving On
(written for 1-million-words' Word of the Day: Mimicry.)Getting up in the morning, swimming for miles before heading into work, stealing Danny's key for the Camaro to drive, taking the team out for celebratory drinks while conveniently has his wallet ( Read more... )

fanfic, fandom: hawaii five-0, pairing: mcgarrett/williams

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simplyn2deep March 28 2013, 15:17:39 UTC
Oh Steve...you broken broken man. you need a hug for what Danny's done to you!

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ignemferam March 28 2013, 15:40:28 UTC
he needs more than a hug. :\ he wants Danny to admit he's made a mistake!

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kaige68 March 28 2013, 16:43:32 UTC
Beautifully done and very heavy!

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ignemferam March 29 2013, 01:06:43 UTC
thank you. and poor Steve.

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heffermonkey March 28 2013, 21:02:52 UTC
Ah man that's tough and ouch and amazingly angsty. Gorgeous.

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ignemferam March 29 2013, 01:07:49 UTC
thank you! blame Alex and his amazing faces, it's too easy to imagine him looking all torn up but trying to pretend it's nothing.

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haldoor_honey March 28 2013, 21:35:26 UTC
This hurts so much, but is so beautifully done. I can see it so clearly.

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ignemferam March 29 2013, 01:09:13 UTC
thank you. :) Alex does invoke the imagery, so beautifully.

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