Comments | ignemferam: Drabble x 2: Accused / Divided

ignemferam

Jul 02, 2013 08:23

Parts of Slices.

( Accused, G )

Comments 7

kaige68 July 2 2013, 15:39:33 UTC

These are excellent. :D Nicely done!

ignemferam July 2 2013, 15:57:00 UTC

thank you! i'm not so sure about these two... something feels lacking. :\

kaige68 July 2 2013, 16:00:59 UTC

I have no retentive memory, so I would need to go through slices again to pick it all up. Stand alone wise, they work, and the Divided is VIVID.

mcgarrett July 2 2013, 16:49:18 UTC

Such a nice contrast from yesterday's fics, but just as amazing (as usual)! I especially love the second one! It's so intimate and adorable :D

ignemferam July 4 2013, 15:58:04 UTC

haha not creepy, eh?

haldoor July 2 2013, 18:43:02 UTC

As ever, nicely done. You do these so well (and yes, so different from yesterday's tone, but equally as good!)

ignemferam July 4 2013, 15:58:41 UTC

thank you! variety is the spice of life, or something like that. :)