Comments | ignemferam: Drabble x 2: Intense / Excited

ignemferam

Drabble x 2: Intense / Excited

Jul 10, 2013 22:51

( Intense, G )

fanfic, fandom: hawaii five-0, pairing: mcgarrett/williams

Comments 5

kaige68 July 10 2013, 14:59:15 UTC

The first one is good and thoughtful and ... special I guess.

The second one is AWESOME!!!! LOVE IT!!

YAY YOU!

ignemferam July 10 2013, 15:03:29 UTC

haha thank you. glad you like 'em.

just don't ask me how from the word "pundit", i got "Just put it in already, Steven." it's like the mystery of the universe or something. :D

kaige68 July 10 2013, 15:10:45 UTC

You made it work, nothing else matters. I used obtuse 22 times in a drabble yesterday. This is much better!

haldoor July 10 2013, 18:50:20 UTC

Hmm, thoughtful stuff in the first one, and yeah, for the second; I can imagine he might have some hesitation about the GI Joe! Love them both!

ignemferam July 10 2013, 22:38:22 UTC

in my head, i think Steve's more apprehensive of watching it with Danny cos Danny probably doesn't like action movie much. Steve himself is pretty excited since he's been a G.I. Joe fan since childhood. but i wanna keep it ambiguous as to why and leave it up to the reader to find their own reasons of Steve's apprehension. does that make sense?

:) glad you like 'em.