Drabble: Rules

[ignemferam]

Rules
(written for 1-million-words' Weekend Challenge - 5 Words: Rudimentary, Ransack, Rubbish, Rubber, Rusty.)Steve, is the man's name, smells like the oceans and moves like sex on legs

Comments

[wings128]

That was great!

[ignemferam]

thank you! will this be good enough to lure you over to the dark side? ;)

[wings128]

Ah...no ;p

[mcgarrett]

Hah, This is so perfect! Love it!!! :D

[ignemferam]

glad you like it.

[thtwzjustadream]

Oh, very nicely done! Excellent way of drawing all the words together, and hotness in just a few words!

[ignemferam]

i almost couldn't do it in 100 words but i like to challenge myself. :) glad you find it hot.

[haldoor_honey]

Well done, getting all the words in the one drabble! And very hot it was too, I must say! ;-)

[ignemferam]

thank you! glad you like it.

[diek09]

How is it possible you build up a hot scene in a drabble? That was like- wow!

[ignemferam]

i'm trying but sometimes i can't be certain if the tension and anticipation work until someone else read it. so i'm glad it works for you.

if you haven't, you should try what the master has written. ;)