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[ignorance48]

Okay, this is for anyone to read, but especially for Shawna, Lauren (both of em), and any other Latin or former Latin student.  This is the speech which I plan on making during states for one of the categories.  Do you think it's good?

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Shawna's edit:

[tyger182]

I've put my comments in parentheses after the thing I think could be improved, and included suggestions. Feel free to ignore it all, or incorporate it all as you see fit

[dead4eternity]

I have no clue what your doing this speech for. But any way the speech looks good.