[fic] honooko: Variations: Roy and Thomas II

Aug 21, 2005 19:54

Entry: Variations Arc
Title: Roy and Thomas II
Author: honooko
Rating: PG
Warning: None
Summary: In this world, he was given a second Second Name.

Thomas, not unsurprisingly, aced the written portion of the exam. )

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psi_neko August 22 2005, 03:42:08 UTC
You have to like this. The fact that Edward is different from when he first got his watch so of course he would have a different name.

"I'm just not used to beginnings."

This was my favorite line because it is true. Edward hasn't really had a beginning since he decided to preform human transmutation. He's been attempting to finish since then. Being in a world which does not know him offers him a beginning that he would be hard-pressed to find in his world.

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honooko August 22 2005, 03:45:49 UTC
Thank you so much!

I kept trying to write him as Fullmetal, and I finally realized that it wasn't working because he's not Fullmetal anymore. So it only made sense to give him a new name.

It was hard to pick one though. XD

Thanks again!

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gwyneda August 22 2005, 03:51:12 UTC
*gurgles inaticulately* the love I have for your stories just leave me baffled. I swear, guh. I cant even think properly XD This is so. Oh, OH! *dies incoherently*

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honooko August 22 2005, 03:55:01 UTC
Aw, thank you! I'm really happy you're enjoying them. ^^

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stickmarionette August 22 2005, 03:57:42 UTC
Yay, more Variations! ^___^

I'm really enjoying the direction this has taken, with 'Tom' taking the SA exam - and getting a different name, that was nice touch. Good job with the naming, too. *is having headaches with Ed's SA name in her own AU* XD

The portrayal of Ed's talents was very nice indeed, as was that ending. ^^

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stickmarionette August 22 2005, 03:58:51 UTC
P.S. “I know what if means, shithead
I know what it means?

[/nitpick]

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honooko August 22 2005, 04:04:11 UTC
Thank you, and THANK YOU! ;o;!

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quickthorne January 24 2006, 22:14:47 UTC
Beautiful! I really like your Thomas!Roy!Ed, and your Roy here!

But, um... next part? *begs*

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magical_poof June 10 2006, 03:37:31 UTC
-stares- -blink- -stares-

I just finished this arc. Awesome.

Where's the rest? -has panic attack- WHERE'S THE REST? DON'T TELL ME YOU'RE STOPPING THERE!!!! Oh, why do the good die young... ;_;

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