Comments | iheartbl: Dance with me: Chapter III (3/?)

iheartbl

Dance with me: Chapter III (3/?)

Oct 27, 2010 16:38

Title: Dance with Me
Fandom: Smallville
Pairing: Chloe and Oliver (Chlollie)
Rating: PG / PG-13
Warning: AU
Summary: Busy searching for the whereabouts of Lex Luthor along with the League, Chloe has enough on her plate without having to worry about attending Queen Industries Charity Ball. Then there's the dance lessons the boys are so determined to give ( Read more... )

watchtower, chlollie, oliver queen, chloe sullivan, green arrow

Comments 10

awesomegeek October 27 2010, 20:58:25 UTC

Is it Lex doing all this? Wait, don't tell me, I'll read it. LOL!
You gotta feel for Chloe when Lois starts on her. Lois is alone a force to be reckoned with and someone I really wouldn't want to come up against, even if i was related to her.
Great job and I'm loving all the Chloe/Ollie moments.

iheartbl October 27 2010, 21:08:50 UTC

LOL Keep reading ;) I wouldn't want to go up against Lois either

ihearttvsnark October 27 2010, 21:59:57 UTC

Aw, poor Ollie has to stay behind. I like that Chloe is worried enough to keep him there. :) Lois cracks me up. Can't wait to see what's next. Great job!

iheartbl October 29 2010, 18:52:41 UTC

:D I love Lois, can't help but including her

nivieniv October 27 2010, 22:15:07 UTC

I love how you write these characters.. it's seems I can't say it enough lol :P But they are so perfectly in character :D

"Grimacing slightly, he yanked the tie from around him, fingers already undoing the first few buttons of his shirt. “Come on, Sidekick,” he teased, “ever just call to see how I’m doing? Isn’t that what friends do?”"

This^ I could totally picture actually happening on the show. It just seems like a very Oliver thing to say and way to act! :)

Can't wait for more :)

iheartbl October 29 2010, 18:55:15 UTC

LOL you can keep saying it, I don't mind at all.
For me, all the sci-fi stuff aside, the characters make the show, so I'm humbled that you think I'm painting them in character :) Thank you!

miranda882 October 27 2010, 22:28:30 UTC

I am loving the frequent updates!

iheartbl October 29 2010, 18:56:09 UTC

Oh no, why did you have to say that lol. I can't keep that up :(

brittany2922 October 28 2010, 18:31:55 UTC

LOL I love the Chlo-Lo :) I also love this story in general. I was already following in on ff.net. I can't wait to read more!

iheartbl October 29 2010, 18:56:36 UTC

I'm so glad you're enjoying it. I too love Chlo-Lo