Comments | iheartkeanu: I forgot how to use this thing.

iheartkeanu

I forgot how to use this thing.

Mar 02, 2005 20:49

I haven't posted in a really long time, it makes me feel a little selfish for hoarding all my feelings. But now im gonna be even moooreeeee selfish and ask for a little helpppp with a dilemma im having. The thing is see, I wrote this short story and wanted to submit to lit mag, butt they say my short story isnt short enough ( it's 7 pages, they ( Read more... )

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moftchor March 3 2005, 05:42:09 UTC

whaaale i already read the whole thing many a time but i really like it and i really don't think you should cut anything :x

you make me wanna write short storieeeeees

iheartkeanu March 3 2005, 06:00:52 UTC

ahh thanks this post was very lonely looking without any comments

britangela March 3 2005, 07:12:53 UTC

first of all...i hate you for being so good at everything that you do...and you do everything...
it came out really well, you had me read half of it so long ago, i was sitting, waiting, wishing to learn how it ended.
and i need to teach you how to make posts outside the box so you can do your cool thing with tall and spill, etc.
and when im avoiding more work this weekend, i'll try to look to cut stuff.

iheartkeanu March 3 2005, 07:29:18 UTC

i like the jack johnson allusion..you gotta hear the rest of the cd so you can make new ones though :P...but thanks for reading it im glad you liked it...if you see anything to cut lemme know and ill -snipsnip-

britangela March 4 2005, 01:05:57 UTC

ah, well i, like all other "good people," have already listened to the cd in several "situations." It's a "crying shame" i couldn't get your chip thing to work though. Is there "no other way"? Maybe "If I could" "staple it together." But that might make my computer "breakdown." i guess i'll "never know."
"Do you remember" English class last year? It was "better together."
Ok, I'm gonna go make some "banana pancakes" and look at the "constellations."
-Belle

hippcat March 3 2005, 07:22:35 UTC

extremely enjoyed everything...

iheartkeanu March 3 2005, 07:30:22 UTC

ahhh so youve caught on to my little alliteration fetish :P, and elipses too.....

mamajazz March 3 2005, 07:41:38 UTC

i read this instead of cry the beloved country, and that's a good book! so you should feel special, write more!

iheartkeanu March 4 2005, 01:59:29 UTC

wee thankss :)

dddigital_love May 19 2005, 03:39:07 UTC

fellow band junkie y0.

add me. for it is I. blondegirlwithnosax.