Finally a ending that was not mean and it was as good as the mean ones. I can't believe this is almost ending. But all good things come to an end.
Your Lex is no Dick Dastardly, now I think you were joking when you said you don't write Lex that much because you are not familiar with the character, this chapter proves you can be wrong sometimes. The way you write Lex is great.
And I love that you didn't dragged out the kidnapping scene too much and this is probably my favorite rescue ever, you know why.
Awww, I can't get over how sweet this ending was. This was a great chapter, it put a huge smile on my face, I thought it was going to be way more angsty, maybe I'm screwed up, but I thought it was very heart warming. Great chapter as always, and I'm trying not to get depressed with the number 23.
Hahaha, thank you, sister. I'm glad the ending was still good even if it wasn't mean. I'm going to be sorry to see this story end too. ♥
Aw, I really appreciate that. It took me a really long time to write those scenes because they were important to the story so I'm really happy you liked the way they turned out.
Favorite rescue ever? Nice. ;)
Yay, I'm so glad I made you smile and you're not screwed up, it was supposed to make you feel good after the last angsty ones. But I'm not going to lie to you, sister, the angst isn't over yet.
OMG!!!! Mandy. This chapter was made of all kinds of awesome!!! You Lex and Chloe scene gave me chills and totally made me glee HAHA You write him well! BASTARD! *kicks him
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I'm so glad you liked it. Lex is one of the characters I don't have a lot of experience writing so I'm so happy the dynamic came off right.
*nods* He did know it was Oliver because he's not stupid and seriously, the costume is not that great of a disguise. Although, still better than glasses. Oh, superheroes. Really glad you enjoyed their confrontation. The hatred between them is epic.
Aww, thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed the Chlollie scene. She totally loves him and was going to heal him whether he liked it or not. Yay for making your heart happy! Thanks so much for the comments. :)
Really enjoyed this chapter. It was great to see this full, evil side of Lex, as he had been holding back in the previous chapters, waiting for his right moment to snatch Chloe. You did an awesome job at capturing that side of Lex, I know you've mentioned before how writing him had the ability to make you nervous, but you had nothing to be nervous about.
I was genuinely surprised how fast Oliver arrived to save her, and I have to say my absolute favorite part was when Lex revealed how he realized Oliver was the Green Arrow. I loved the tie in of all his team members being employed at Queen Industries, but more than that I loved when Lex's line: "I knew it was you when I came in here and saw the nauseating way Chloe was looking at you with stars in her eyes. It was the same look she had on her face the night you brought her to the party at the mansion.”
I just loved that it was Chloe's look on her face that ultimately gave the last clue to the proof he needed. I know even from personal experience, that woman can give away how they
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Thanks, Dawn, I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter and thank you for saying that. I do get nervous writing Lex because I never saw the earlier seasons and the seasons I did see with him were kind of boring. I'm more comfortable writing Ollie/Lex since I always liked their scenes, but still, Lex scenes seem to take me forever to write.
I debated about that part. Lex was always going to shoot him, but I was trying to come up with how to stop him from finding out his identity and there was just no other way to make it believable if he didn't know it was Ollie. I'm glad you liked that it was Chloe's fault (for lack of a better word).
Haha, it is John. I was thinking about making it vaguer so people would wonder if it was Zee, but I figured if people were paying close enough attention, they'd know it was him.
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I can't believe this is almost ending. But all good things come to an end.
Your Lex is no Dick Dastardly, now I think you were joking when you said you don't write Lex that much because you are not familiar with the character, this chapter proves you can be wrong sometimes. The way you write Lex is great.
And I love that you didn't dragged out the kidnapping scene too much and this is probably my favorite rescue ever, you know why.
Awww, I can't get over how sweet this ending was. This was a great chapter, it put a huge smile on my face, I thought it was going to be way more angsty, maybe I'm screwed up, but I thought it was very heart warming. Great chapter as always, and I'm trying not to get depressed with the number 23.
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Aw, I really appreciate that. It took me a really long time to write those scenes because they were important to the story so I'm really happy you liked the way they turned out.
Favorite rescue ever? Nice. ;)
Yay, I'm so glad I made you smile and you're not screwed up, it was supposed to make you feel good after the last angsty ones. But I'm not going to lie to you, sister, the angst isn't over yet.
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I'm so glad you liked it. Lex is one of the characters I don't have a lot of experience writing so I'm so happy the dynamic came off right.
*nods* He did know it was Oliver because he's not stupid and seriously, the costume is not that great of a disguise. Although, still better than glasses. Oh, superheroes. Really glad you enjoyed their confrontation. The hatred between them is epic.
Aww, thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed the Chlollie scene. She totally loves him and was going to heal him whether he liked it or not. Yay for making your heart happy! Thanks so much for the comments. :)
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I was genuinely surprised how fast Oliver arrived to save her, and I have to say my absolute favorite part was when Lex revealed how he realized Oliver was the Green Arrow. I loved the tie in of all his team members being employed at Queen Industries, but more than that I loved when Lex's line: "I knew it was you when I came in here and saw the nauseating way Chloe was looking at you with stars in her eyes. It was the same look she had on her face the night you brought her to the party at the mansion.”
I just loved that it was Chloe's look on her face that ultimately gave the last clue to the proof he needed. I know even from personal experience, that woman can give away how they ( ... )
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I debated about that part. Lex was always going to shoot him, but I was trying to come up with how to stop him from finding out his identity and there was just no other way to make it believable if he didn't know it was Ollie. I'm glad you liked that it was Chloe's fault (for lack of a better word).
Haha, it is John. I was thinking about making it vaguer so people would wonder if it was Zee, but I figured if people were paying close enough attention, they'd know it was him.
Thanks for the comments!
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